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| This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka |
| Chapter: Chapter 1: Immune |
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| vladt | 06/17/2006 12:52 am |
| love the crptic trey. can't wait to see what "So many lies spinning in head. It is important to clear spider webs before becoming to big," means. very entertaining read, thank you |
| wall_flower | 06/16/2006 12:48 pm |
| About to get very interesting indeed, I'm sure. This is an incredible work- can't wait to see where you'll take the 'William' character :]] Nice one. |
| jl1980 | 06/13/2006 06:30 pm |
wow...this is intense, and fascinating so far...reminds me very much of holocaust stories i've read...trey reminds me of a male dru sort of...excellent chatper  |
| Thanks! I have plans for Trey. Just haven't got any of them ironed out yet. ;) |
| nmcil | 06/13/2006 12:57 pm |
Love your intro - powerful lyrics and a really good intro for your piece - I look forward to reading the work. Please Please Please don't let this work join the ranks of the "abandoned" FF - Really like your sparse structure - your language gives the impact and very good descriptive quality that draws me into wanting to know more about them straight-away.
Good Luck with your work -
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| Thank you!!!! I promise not to abandon this story. That is one of my pet peves. I hate finding a really good story only to have it abandoned. |
