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| Buyer Beware by just_sue |
| Chapter: 16 |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 07/22/2006 12:49 am |
| {growls} Jerk!! Angelus and Smith. Both of them need to BURN. {Growls} Excellent chapter update. I'm spitting mad at those two. |
*grins*
Thank you, Tasha! They do seem to get that grrr reaction a lot! So very happy you are still reading and enjoying, hun. BFN |
| jemjem | 07/04/2006 08:13 am |
| I never leave reviews but I want to encourage you to continue with this story.There are many stories now about Spike as a victim but your story has manged to keep in characterand let him retain some of the strength and dignity that is so important to him.In the last chapter the sentance about him standing up straight before leaving the house was so true to Spike.I like Buffy too and thereis nothing I enjoy than evil Angel getting(hopefully) his comeuppence |
Thank you! Am very flattered that you have taken the time to leave a review - much appreciated, hun. Honestly, a few words left for any writer is valued, is all the payment ever received for our efforts.
So glad you are liking the story and the characterisations, and hope you continue to do so. BFN |
| Marie | 06/20/2006 02:04 am |
I don't know why I haven't read this till now but you have to continue. I need to know what happens. Pretty please |
Thank you, Marie! Lovely to have a new reader - especially a commenty one! *grins*
Hope you continue to enjoy. BFN |
| maggie | 06/19/2006 10:03 am |
| hi, so loving this story also another one i staeted at spuffy realm check every day for a new update i find your stories wonderful different ,refreshing please i hope you update soon dying to read what comes next want to know if buffy gets there before they do any thing more to spike thank you for a great read maggie |
*hugs*
Hi, Maggie! Have updated and do hope you like - though the AN at the bottom will probably not be to your liking. *hides*
Thank you for your ever faithful support. I value it greatly. xxx |
| vladt | 06/14/2006 10:04 pm |
| excellent chapter. touch of sadness, dru has always been a personal favorite. thanks for the fine read. |
Thank you! Sorry for bring Dru in - only to kill her off - but there is method in my seeming madness. *grins*
Hope you continue to enjoy. BFN |
| Cewcew | 06/14/2006 08:56 am |
| It was a wonderful chappie! Of course I may be byist, Because I love this story. I hope you'll update agen soon. |
Thank you, hun! Be as biased as you like - I have no problem being on the receiving end! LOL
Thanks for enjoying. BFN |
| Robyn | 06/14/2006 07:24 am |
| How shocking and sad, I really hope that Smith pays for dusting Dru. I love that she was able to give Spike a message and say goodbye in her own way, that she knew what was coming. It is going to be very interesting if Ethan ends up joining the mix. I really like how well you mix the action with the emotion or thoughts of the characters. Like Smith, you had very little with him really and yet I got the impression (and I hope I’m not to far off ) that he likes his secrets and gets a kick out of the pain and suffering of others. Thanks for the update you did a fantastic job with this chapter the wait is always worth it. |
Thank you, Robyn! Be assured that Smith will get his just desserts - he's a meanie! I am looking forward to getting Ethan into the story again, but that won't happen for a couple of chappies at least.
So glad you are still liking. BFN |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 06/13/2006 02:26 am |
| Eeep! EEEEEP! |
| Er, thanks? LOL |
| Nikkole | 06/13/2006 12:43 am |
| Very interesting chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Hope to see more from you very soon!! |
| Thank you, sweetie! Glad to have grabbed your interest and will do my bestest not to keep you waiting too long for more. BFN, hun. |
| Dee | 06/12/2006 09:31 pm |
| Okay, I enjoyed that chapter and the cliffhanger is just to good to leave for weeks and weeks. So I hope you will update soon. I really do like this fic. Very original plot and well paced. |
| Thank you, Dee! You'll be glad to know the next chappie is underway - though I am still the slowest typist around! So glad you are enjoying and hope you continue to do so. *hugs* |
| Randi Giles | 06/12/2006 07:42 pm |
| OH MY FREAKIN GOSH!!!! You end it there...how could you..dang those cliffies |
*smothers giggle*
Aw, c'mon, cliffies are just like commercial breaks - they give you time to do something else in between. Have I convinced you? *grins*
Thanks for commenting, hun. BFN |
| DizzyB | 06/12/2006 06:54 pm |
| Ohmygosh! This is awesome. Can't wait for the next update. And was rather surprised to see Dru reintroduced and dusted within the same chapter. More, please. |
Oooh, I surprised you! Cool! *grins*
Am so glad you enjoyed and will get the next bit out soonest; I'm hoping for a couple of weeks. Thanks for reviewing, sweetie. BFN |
| jl1980 | 06/12/2006 06:46 pm |
| oh that was so horrifically cruel!!! poor spike!! oh i'm crying for him, poor thing!!! and dru...sorry but you made me like her with this chapter...i so can't wait for your next update, this one was incredible |
*gulps* Me, cruel? I s'pose in a certain light it could look that way, but surely not enough for tears. *pets and passes tissue*
Am so glad you liked Dru - I was actually sorry to dust her but it had to be done. Should have more in a couple of weeks...maybe. Thanks for still reading and commenting, sweetie. *hugs* |
| Verda | 06/12/2006 05:50 pm |
| We knew a showdown for Spike was inevitable. It's neccessary to the story, and well said it is! Glad you're well and everything I've read of is top notch! Never bored, not once. Eagerly awaiting your next update. *hugs* |
| Hey, Verda! I am chuffed that you are enjoying - and reviewing! - and hope not to keep you waiting too long for more. BFN, hun. *hugs* |
| Jackofspikes | 06/12/2006 05:37 pm |
| I loved it...it was worth the wait...I will patiently wait for more |
Thank you, hun! So glad you liked and hope to have more sooner this time. I like to see patience rewarded! *grins*
BFN *hugs* |
| Taylormaid | 06/12/2006 05:28 pm |
| YAY!!! An update!!!! This was another WONDERFUL chapter! I was glued to every line. As always, you leave me chewing my nails and wishing for more!!! |
| Thank you, sweetie! That is such a nice compliment and I will do my best to have more for yu in a couple of weeks - no promises mind! BFN, hun. *hugs* |
| Lou | 06/12/2006 05:16 pm |
| That's torn it! Not for the fainthearted! |
| *nods* Only seasoned and courageous readers should look! More soonish - I hope! BFN, hun. |
| Coquine | 06/12/2006 03:39 pm |
I'll review in a second, just lemme do this real quick:
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
Okay, I'm done. Yay! Finally an update. I've missed this story terribly! And GAH the suspense is killing me. Each scene had me gasping for the next one. It's kind of like having a word just on the tip of your tongue but still out of reach. We all know the breaking point is just around the corner and we're gagging for it! I'm not sure why you're unsatisfied with this chapter, because I'm guessing its purpose was to build the tension and it did that a little too well. It was amazing. And I have to say, I've found that a Spuffy author's worth can be measured very accurately by how well they write Drusilla, and you did a superb job. You got that whole 'crazy but really knows what's going on' thing down pat. Kudos, again! Can't wait for the next chappie, and I also hope it doesn't take as long! |
Ah, Coquine! Thank you for such a kind and enthusiastic review! I am so glad you liked, especially dear Dru -I do feel bad about killing her off so quickly.
Will do my best not to take so long next time - but don't look for more for a couple of weeks. BFN
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| kim | 06/12/2006 03:34 pm |
I forgot elsewhere to mention Ethan...oh, dear...he has quite a lot of plans...not liking that he has the Cruciamentum serum!
How's Giles doing? |
Hey, someone remembered Giles! Expect to see some movement on his situ soonish. *grins*
Ethan is the king of red herrings - expect anything and everything from him. BFN |
| Irina | 06/12/2006 03:22 pm |
| Wow! Somebody was really busy and productive, I gotta say I enjoyed Ethan's appearance at the beginning of the chapter. The glimpse into Angel's head was really insightful, I think you captured his personalty wonderfully. I absolutely loved your portrayal of Dru, it's a shame she ended up dusted. Spike was so brave. *bites nails* I can't wait to find out what happens next. Great chapter, it definitely entertained! |
Thank you, Irina! I am not that happy with this chappie but am thankful that it has entertained. I like to feel into the characters a bit more, but the need to get some action in is shoving that to one side right now - does that make sense? LOL
So very glad you liked Dru - I really didn't want her to go. BFN |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 06/12/2006 03:18 pm |
| Good chapter.I'm hating Angel in this fic,and I'm glad Buffy left him.It's June and summer here,but it's really cold.Stupid weird summer weather.It's not supposed to be this cold in June.Update soon. |
Angel not liking is cool and toally allowed!
Have had a totally sweltering day here and it looks like storming soon. Will be glad when it breaks. Seems like we've nicked your good weather!
Will do my best - but not for a couple of weeks soonest. BFN |
