Intolerable Beauty by Dark Eyed Seer
Chapter: Madness Takes Its Toll
 
fallen_angel06/25/2006 02:09 pm
split personalities? i love all three of the stories you've put up. They've all got me hooked. Write all of them, please!!
Elizabeth Anne Summers06/20/2006 12:37 am
Ooo, garbage! *bounces* My daddy's met one of them too

Still like the other story, though... two spikes... yummyness
vladt06/15/2006 09:17 pm
will would drive you up the wall after a very short period of time. but spike, is spike. thanks for the read.
Spuffyshipper06/14/2006 01:56 pm
This is a really good story.Do this one.
Slayergirl06/14/2006 07:43 am
This is a good story.Do this one.
Update soon.
yangchencen06/14/2006 02:20 am
This one! This one! THIS ONE! PLEEEAAAASE!

Souled-Angelus-went-to-Dru-and-Spike? Split-personality? Yummy-yummy-scared-William? Punk-crazy-Spike? And all that in Season One?
Please please write this one!
Dreylin06/14/2006 01:39 am
Oh wow. I *like* this. Now I've really gotta find the other two possibilities.
Sharon06/14/2006 01:16 am
Okay, you're really heartless, making us choose which of these three for you to continue.

But, if I must choose, I choose this one. I'd love to see where you take it.

Thanks for the agonizing choice!
Cewcew06/14/2006 12:21 am
Cant you just writw all of em? There all so good!
Max06/13/2006 11:19 pm
Oooh I like this.
neo_trinityknot06/13/2006 08:44 pm
Okat, this one is madness. I love the plotline so far, and I have to make this and the twins a tie. I wont choose, so there! *pouts*
Ravenor06/13/2006 08:41 pm
Okay this is just so hard choosing the best as all three are great beginnings.... but I can't help but love this one! What did Angel do to Will and Spike and how did they become seperate so to speak? Wonder what Angel will do for an explaination.
LeeAnne06/13/2006 08:27 pm
I love this one...it definitely has my vote..anything that has helpless Spike in it is an automatic fave...add to it bad boy Spike...gold!

I hope you continue it...I will anxiously await new chapters....

Tonia06/13/2006 08:03 pm
Bad Angel! I hope someone kicks his ass for treating William badly.
If the other two are as good as this one, I just might beg you to write all three.
jl198006/13/2006 06:55 pm
wow...i have no words...give me a second...okay, here they are...this is INCREDIBLE!!! i love this story!! please continue, i am fascinated already
Kawaki06/13/2006 06:54 pm
This has me very intrigued. Can't wait for the next chapter.
cee06/13/2006 06:20 pm
Awww. Now you've gone and done it! You've written three very intriguing stories!

However, I love them all. Consider each of my reviews a vote for that particular story! That said, you choose which one you would like to continue with. It's your muse

::squishes your brain::
samson2806/13/2006 05:16 pm
Oooh, interesting.
L06/13/2006 05:15 pm
All three are intriguing, but "Madness..." would be my first choice to follow along with.
06/13/2006 05:03 pm
i definitely vote for this first choice -- and 'story of the world' also please :-)
redwulf5006/13/2006 04:33 pm
Oh shit, this is all Angel's fault I bet, can we kill the poofter yet??
Maggie06/13/2006 04:22 pm
Which one should you continue? I'm a greedy bastard and want all three!! I know that's no help -- so I guess I vote for this one. But am looking forward to whichever one you end up doing!
Dar06/13/2006 04:06 pm
Oh this sounds like a fascinating would look forward to more of this.
DeamSamWinchesterfan06/13/2006 03:26 pm
Good story so far.I love it so much!Continue this story!I love "Will".He seems traumatized.
Update really really soon.