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| Carefully Everywhere Descending by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: Not in Kansas Anymore |
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| fallen_angel | 06/25/2006 01:34 pm |
| Jamie? kindda cute. maybe you shold use it sometimes in the story. |
| vladt | 06/15/2006 07:41 pm |
| very good read. great potential. thanks for the read. |
| VWalk | 06/15/2006 07:08 am |
I haven't read the other two intros but this one has definitely gotten my attention.
I like the concept a lot. After all who could turn down two Spikes.
Looking forward to the third segment.. and reading the other two intros. |
| RJ | 06/14/2006 03:05 pm |
| The only thing better than one Spike is two! I like the twist you've put on this story. Hope it keeps going. FYI - there are just a few typos here and there (sorry, I'm a grammar grouch). |
| Lori | 06/14/2006 06:44 am |
| Please continue this fic. I'm liking it so far. Thanks. |
| Cewcew | 06/14/2006 12:12 am |
| lol this looks like is going to be a winner. cant wait for the next chapter. |
| Ravenor | 06/13/2006 08:49 pm |
| Okay twin Spikes... sigh... now it is even harder to choose and I simply can't!! Any chance that you will maybe continue all three... or maybe do one and then another and then another:-) ?? Yes I am greedy what can I say but your stuff is just so great!! |
| neo_trinityknot | 06/13/2006 08:35 pm |
Please! Continue this one, I have a weakness for twincest! I love your take on the twins so far. Apparently everyone else likes 'Madness', but I dont see it  |
| neo_trinityknot | 06/13/2006 08:35 pm |
| Please! Continue this one, I have a weakness for twincest! I love your take on the twins so far. Apparently everyone else likes 'Madness', but I dont see it |
| Sarah | 06/13/2006 08:24 pm |
| You're making my life difficult, I like this story, too. I wish you could keep writing all three of the new stories! |
| jl1980 | 06/13/2006 07:52 pm |
love this second chapter too...  this should get interesting...which one will he choose? *if* she chooses ;) excellent update...still voting for madness though  |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 06/13/2006 05:54 pm |
| Mmmm two Spikes, always a big hit with me!! Only thing better than two Spikes is three spikes, muahahahahaha *imagines her own male harem made out of spikes* lol |
| Dar | 06/13/2006 04:08 pm |
| Twins twice the every thing. love the idea |
| daisy | 06/13/2006 03:26 pm |
| ohh, yeah another chapter. can't wait for more. soon please |
