This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka
Chapter: Chapter 4: Hole In The Sky
 
Isabel06/21/2006 01:05 pm
These people are horrible! Geez, Kelly was just a little girl. I hope she didn't die from the blow to her head. And Tara's father is a first class asshole.
vladt06/17/2006 11:27 am
very good update, describing a very disturbing world (or parts of ours.) thanks for the fine read.
wall_flower06/16/2006 01:09 pm
Ugh- how terrible! This world gets a little more devestating at every turn. These soldiers are inhumane at best :[ Fantastically gripping story.
jl198006/14/2006 07:43 am
oh how horrible...you have created a truly horrific yet fascinating world here...love reading this fic...!!! cant wait for more
katakata06/14/2006 02:32 am
Interesting world you've outlined here - can't wait to see more of it. Well done on some pretty enticing OCs as well (I'm especially interested in finding out Trey's backstory).