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| This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka |
| Chapter: Chapter 4: Hole In The Sky |
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| Isabel | 06/21/2006 01:05 pm |
| These people are horrible! Geez, Kelly was just a little girl. I hope she didn't die from the blow to her head. And Tara's father is a first class asshole. |
| vladt | 06/17/2006 11:27 am |
| very good update, describing a very disturbing world (or parts of ours.) thanks for the fine read. |
| wall_flower | 06/16/2006 01:09 pm |
| Ugh- how terrible! This world gets a little more devestating at every turn. These soldiers are inhumane at best :[ Fantastically gripping story. |
| jl1980 | 06/14/2006 07:43 am |
oh how horrible...you have created a truly horrific yet fascinating world here...love reading this fic...!!! cant wait for more  |
| katakata | 06/14/2006 02:32 am |
| Interesting world you've outlined here - can't wait to see more of it. Well done on some pretty enticing OCs as well (I'm especially interested in finding out Trey's backstory). |