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| Intolerable Beauty by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: Please Have Exact Change |
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| fallen_angel | 06/25/2006 02:16 pm |
| ok split personalities it is then. Oh and horrible Angel for doing all those things to Will. |
| Maddy | 06/16/2006 08:55 am |
That's something different from every spuffy fanfiction i ever read. Refreshing ;)
I'm really intrigued what will happen next.
Though i must say Will is distrubing... seems kinda mentaly retarded.
Hope Will and Spike will melt into one personality eventualy.
But still I love the story, waiting for more! |
| Anona | 06/15/2006 04:26 pm |
| Very interesting. I'm interested in reading more. |
| carole | 06/15/2006 03:45 pm |
| wow i really like this and would like to see more of it. great work. |
| VWalk | 06/15/2006 07:18 am |
This is interesting... intriguing even.
I think I like the actual twins premise better than this one - though there are of course similarities. (The two distinct personalities for example in one package here and two there.)
I'm assuming at some point you're planning to merge the two personalities into one 'sane' person.
Right now I prefer 'Descending' but I can see I'm in the minority.
On to number three. |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 06/15/2006 05:55 am |
| Good chapter.Poor Will/Spike. Update soon. |
| Ravenor | 06/14/2006 11:21 pm |
| Okay and it just keeps on getting better and better!! Love both Will and Spike and Angel's reason for keeping him away from the Scoobies.... he didn't know if he could trust them not to hurt Will and Spike :-)This is going to be really good !! |
| Dreylin | 06/14/2006 08:53 pm |
| This is one of the most interesting lead-ins for a story I've read in a while. I really hope this one gets more than three chapters. This one was a wee bit heavy on exposition, but that was probably unavoidable with the three chapter intro. I can't wait to see more interaction between William/Spike and the Scoobies. |
| Typerbabe | 06/14/2006 07:07 pm |
| This is a great story, really interesting and different! More soon please! |
| dAR | 06/14/2006 05:40 pm |
| I love both side of this Spike coin ( twins are nice too). Scoobies better handle him very carefully. Sweet and Spicy perfect combo |
| jl1980 | 06/14/2006 05:39 pm |
awww....i love will...this story is still awesome, i'm loving it!! my vote still stays with this one, please please continue  |
| redwulf50 | 06/14/2006 05:01 pm |
grrrr, great chappie  but need more  |
| 06/14/2006 04:30 pm |
oh, i *love* this! :-)
i love angel caring such good care of will, i love spike-the-great-warrior, and i just love will all to (reese's) pieces! i want to hug him and cuddle him and baby him, and go "bad scoobies!" if they upset him.
*please* keep this story going -- please please pretty please? with whipped cream and a cherry on top :-) |
| Harry 4Eyes | 06/14/2006 04:10 pm |
Hmmm....so Spike is a by product of Angelus torture, and William is an innocent by product of something that happened before he was turned....interesting.
So both parites somehow have to merge, I think William needs acceptence for who he is and Spike needs...um...something. So Angel needs to bring him more often, a century of isolation with only Angel for company is never good...even for the sane..lol
This one is a very close second, only because the other one has a cute little girl, and I want to see Buffy attempting to win the little girl over so she can drool over her pops.
Well update soon
Harry
P.S are you ure you can't continue all 3? how about 2 out of 3? |
| SpaceLord | 06/14/2006 03:36 pm |
Well this is my second favourite of the three stories you have out at the moment. This is different enough to make it interesting and I really like it when Spike/William have an interesting and complex relationship with Angel.
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