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| This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka |
| Chapter: Chapter Seven: Children Of The Grave |
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| Isabel | 06/21/2006 01:24 pm |
| So glad Willow and Oz found Kelly and she's not dead. Great story. |
| vladt | 06/17/2006 12:20 pm |
| nice to see you brought kelly back, even if, sadly. thanks for the read. |
| wall_flower | 06/16/2006 01:22 pm |
| Nice connection- very neat. And I love that you've tied Oz into the story too, though the willow part made me choke up a little. Can't wait to read more of this- it's incredible :]] Truly unique my dear. |
| Missus_grace | 06/16/2006 11:47 am |
I just discovered this story and I'm glad I jumped in and started reading. Very interesting plot and backstories.
I can't wait to see the rebels crush the Initiative, but I'm sorry that Riley's already dead. I would have enjoyed watching Buffy beat on his traitorous a*s! |
| Pin | 06/16/2006 07:22 am |
| Another excellent chapter. I really like your new characters and the way you are placing all of the players on the board. Looking forward to more. |
| I'm really glad you are enjoying this story. Don't worry though, chapter eight has already been started. (228 words so far) ;) |
| jl1980 | 06/16/2006 07:14 am |
oh wow...so kelly's all right!! awesome!!! you see, you've made me care so much about an oc you've only just introduced! you are an excellent writer, i can't believe i've never read your stuff before!! very very good story! can't wait for more |
I just couldn't leave her. ;)
The last story I wrote,before posting here,was sometime in 2001/2002. I posted them to mailing list I'm on. After getting little to no responses I just quit. I couldn't even tell if they were being read. (btw-I really like that feature here)It took me awhile to get the nerve up to try again. I'm glad I did. =) |