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| This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka |
| Chapter: Chapter 8: Serenity |
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| nmcil | 06/18/2006 06:22 pm |
| Wonderful new chapters and intro of new characters - much thanks for the quick updates - |
| wall_flower | 06/18/2006 06:33 am |
| Terrific. I need more! |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 06/17/2006 10:09 pm |
great 2 chapters.. i love how you are retelling all of the past events.. very nice..  |
| Cewcew | 06/17/2006 12:53 pm |
| More!!!! |
| vladt | 06/17/2006 12:25 pm |
| very good read. thanks love the ending of the chapter. |
| Lou | 06/17/2006 11:52 am |
| Great adventure - and nicely done with all the back stories. |
| SpaceLord | 06/17/2006 08:22 am |
| Well this story sure has a nice start....I'm with Kelly about killing them all....that is the way to go |
| jl1980 | 06/17/2006 08:07 am |
| wow...powerful chapter...you're developing each and every character so well...perfectly done and as always i cant wait for more |
| Pin1 | 06/17/2006 07:52 am |
| Excellent chapter! I like the way you are handling all of these parallel lines of activities. Great job. |
To Everyone:
I'm SO glad that you guys liked that last chapter. I felt like I'd have better luck banging my head against my desk than actually getting the chapter finished. I am working on chapter nine. so hopefully this one will come out easier than the last. Thank you for the reviews!! =) |
