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| No Glass Slipper by Demonica Mills |
| Chapter: Chapter 7 |
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| sirc | 07/16/2006 06:44 am |
| great chapter |
| Robyn | 06/21/2006 08:03 am |
| You are doing a fantastic job of showing how hard their life could have gone. When Dawn was taken I could feel the pain of her and Buffy. You also managed to do a creditable job of showing the coldness and uncaring of Mrs. Rothchild for the feelings of those she is supposed to care for. Telling Dawn that she doesn't count and threatening her sister because she wants to 'save' Dawn shows how misguided agents of child services can be. I love that Dawn compared her to 'White Oleander' and I am really looking forward to where you go from here. |
| vladt | 06/19/2006 06:59 pm |
| very good read, thanks. now how are you going to fix it? thanks again. |
| jl1980 | 06/19/2006 05:30 pm |
oh man...how awful...poor buffy and dawnie...what are they gonna do? they have to get her back...i promise, this chapter just ripped my heart out  |
| redwulf50 | 06/19/2006 05:12 pm |
| Ya know I think Spike needs to visit Mrs Bitch |
| Tamara | 06/19/2006 02:40 pm |
| Oh, this is a bad situation.How are you gonna fix it? |
| UncagedMuse | 06/19/2006 10:36 am |
| *sobs* I just love how you do this from their perspectives! It's just an amazing read. |
| maryperk | 06/19/2006 09:50 am |
| I feel Buffy's pain. I really do. Great chapter. |
| Pin1 | 06/19/2006 09:39 am |
| You are really cranking up the angst very convincingly. This is the dark side of their future that was never explored, but potentially there. Great job, looking forward to more. |
