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| Intolerable Beauty by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me |
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| fallen_angel | 06/25/2006 02:22 pm |
| hope you'll continue this |
| Tina | 06/23/2006 11:27 pm |
| It's cruel and unusual punishment that you are making us choose. I desperately want to read to the end of all three! Since you are asking us to choose though, this is my first choice, though Story of the World is a very close second. Not that Carefully Everywhere Decending is all that far behind. Would begging for all three help? What would it take to get all three? I don't mind waiting! |
| Ravenor | 06/23/2006 12:25 am |
Oh definitely loving this story :-) Angel should be ashamed of himself for doing that to Will and I don't think the others are going to look at Angel the same way anymore. Bad Giles too! Two seperate personalities... will they stay seperate or will they merge into one at some point.... have to say that the idea of both staying around is really appealing :-)Of course it would be very sad if one of them had to go away :-(
Can't wait to see where this one goes from here :-)
As for the voting for a favourite... too difficult to pick just one :-) |
| samson28 | 06/20/2006 11:50 am |
I'm really enjoying this split of Spike/William. Something I would normally avoid!
More please. *g* |
| Harry 4Eyes | 06/20/2006 10:48 am |
I don't think Angel will be as popular as he was before, and goes towards explaining how ended up so f**ked up after he was turned and Williams words probably gives an idea of why he was f**ked up before he was turned.
I like William, he's kinda like a regular teenager who is a complete nerd...like Andrew is, only not anyway near annoying and Spike is...well Spike only more intense version of him.
Wonder which version Buffy will be more attracted to? probably Spike but she'll get along better with Will.
Loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| Pulchra | 06/20/2006 01:12 am |
*blink-blink* wow! I love this! It's a whole new look on things! it's great!
please update again soon? |
| Dreylin | 06/20/2006 12:41 am |
| I'm loving every word of this fic, especially Spike's perspective on his battles with Slayers. |
| LeeAnne | 06/19/2006 07:06 pm |
This just keeps getting better and better...i am so intrigued by both spike and william...will is just so cute and loveable and spike is still the "big bad" just with the soul...i love it...
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work! |
| carole | 06/19/2006 06:59 pm |
great chapter. i really felt bad for william. great spike responce. hope you write more of this one. actually i love of them so im not sure which to vote for. lol couldnt we just vote for all of them  |
| Cewcew | 06/19/2006 06:10 pm |
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| jl1980 | 06/19/2006 05:35 pm |
| i love this so much...i'm drawn to both personalities, and longing for more right now!! the horror of the moment when angel tried to bring spike out was so real, so harrowing...an excellent job on this chapter (and this story still gets my vote ) |
| selyne | 06/19/2006 05:30 pm |
| This is interesting. I'd like to read more. |
| redwulf50 | 06/19/2006 05:15 pm |
LOL, I like soike  |
| Dar | 06/19/2006 04:32 pm |
| I'm liking both Spike's more and more but Angel and Giles less and less. Good Chapter. |
| SpaceLord | 06/19/2006 04:08 pm |
Well this is rocketing up to my fav of your 3 stories from the first three chapters I've read. I like the way he's 2 personas my only concern is that Will seems a little young.
I still would like you to do the "world" story cause I think that it too has a lot of potential but I would also love to see this get finished |
| ahigh | 06/19/2006 04:06 pm |
| Really liking this story so far. I haven't read anything like it before. Can't wait to read more. |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 06/19/2006 03:44 pm |
| Good chapter.Poor Will/Spike.Bad Angel!Update soon. |
| Sarah | 06/19/2006 02:59 pm |
| This si such an interesting take on the 'Souled Spike' persona, and I really enjoy the unique premise. Keep up the good work! |
