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| Origins: Revelations by Niamh |
| Chapter: The shadow of power |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 07/17/2006 07:41 pm |
| Whoa ... cliffie there. I'm glad the next chapter is up. I would have been climbing the walls. Excellent update. |
| vladt | 07/05/2006 11:49 pm |
| congratulations for the 5 new ones. well deserved. and thanks for the excellent update. |
| sirc | 07/04/2006 05:31 am |
| great chapter |
| Verda | 07/02/2006 11:41 pm |
| Congrats on your awards, you so deserve them. This is a incredible story, and isn't it fun to have immediate responses to your story, even though there's no advance or residual check to come. Kudos to you Niamh. |
| nmcil | 06/26/2006 09:35 am |
Great Read - thanks ever for bringing us this terrific adventure. Wish there was something I could do to make you feel better, appreciate all your efforts at working through your pain and keeping with your writing projects.
Hope you keep Willow as a strong adversary for a while - If not on this story, maybe in some future tale a Willow Angelus pairing up as Super Duo of Evil might interest you. Look forward to your next updates. |
| HPfan | 06/24/2006 10:55 pm |
| So glad to see a new chapter. Jenner and his group are all such intriguing characters. And Willow - that girl is just plain scary. Pity that a good, hard slap wouldn't be enough to bring back the sweet, shy nerd that she used to be. Enjoying this story more than I can say. Hope you can update again soon. |
| oracleholly | 06/22/2006 10:23 pm |
| hey look - my first review now that I'm sort of back! Excellent last two chapters, Nia. I'm really enjoying where this is headed. |
| Neart | 06/21/2006 03:45 pm |
| fab chapter, loved the interaction and moving between all the different players, Wes being all watchery and Angelus being his usual 'patient' self. |
| Tina | 06/21/2006 01:30 pm |
| Thanks so much for all your hard work. I constantly look forward to your updates! I know this is a bit late be saying this, but I love having Oz back, especially how you write him. |
| Sarah | 06/21/2006 08:36 am |
| I love this story. It gives me a happy every time I read it. |
| letitia | 06/21/2006 07:49 am |
| LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!! Glad that Anya/Tara and Oz are working as a team and Xander as always leaves things to be desired. And I hope Jenner makes the right decision. And now Buffy and Spike could have the "future" they want. Master Spike had to make an appearance during the meeting. Just so much I could say but LOVE IT is at the top of the list. |
| margaret | 06/20/2006 10:50 pm |
| thanks for keeping this going it just gets better and better |
| Pin1 | 06/20/2006 07:51 pm |
| Love this chapter and I think Jenner is a great character. You write a scarily crazy Willow. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. |
| slaymesoftly | 06/20/2006 07:48 pm |
| Five new well-deserved ones! Way to leave a cliff-hanger, evil woman! |
| Esther | 06/20/2006 06:37 pm |
| Aww, congrats!! Oh mama, this is just awesome!!! I love all the new details and further exploration of each character's situation/feelings. And I'm uber curious as to who/what broke through the wards at the house. Can't wait for more!!! |
| Emily | 06/20/2006 06:26 pm |
We only rock because we see how much you rock more! Looking great, and the plot is really progressing quite smoothly. But i want some Dawn/Wesley things... im interested in that little combo ;) Good job, can't wait to see the next one |
| pretty_in_fangs | 06/20/2006 05:35 pm |
| Your writing remains superb. The imagery on Willow is great, and I love the tension within the Magic Box. |
| maryperk | 06/20/2006 05:32 pm |
| Great chapter. Loved it. |
| 06/20/2006 05:31 pm |
well, i've read both origins and revelations in the past week and let me tell you they're incredible! i've been reading of spuffyrealm and therefore couldn't comment since i'm not a member but enough of that. these stories are fantastic! your plotlines are so complete, its incredible. you're definetly not a willow fan,  . I have to admit, you had me nearly to tears when casey died. he was so brave in defending dawn and, wow, it was so sad. i cannot wait for the angelus ass-whooping. i like the interaction between jenner and faith too, very interesting. anyway, keep up the outstanding work! |
| Tamara | 06/20/2006 05:26 pm |
It looks like Angel and Willow aren't thinking too clearly. Angel's ignoring a valuable info source and Willow is blaming Spike for the things she messed up.
I wonder what Jenner's going to do. |
| redwulf50 | 06/20/2006 05:25 pm |
LOL, ok that ending is deffinantly from cliffies are us
Beautriful chappie I love the way you weave.  |
