The Story of the World by Dark Eyed Seer
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass
 
07/19/2006 12:29 am
Ooo, you are an excellent writer. Please update your stories as soon as you possibly can.
VWalk06/29/2006 01:29 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY. To bad my vote only counts for one. Why are readers more interested in Spike twincest that Spike Daddy.

I would love for you to continue this story now. But if you decide not - please keep it in mind for the future.

I am totally smitten with it.
vladt06/23/2006 02:17 pm
fun chapter. thanks. this is my favorite of the three. thanks for starting all three. all the storylines have great potential (and all should be written) but, if only one, then this one. thanks again.
duke666506/23/2006 01:27 pm
another great chapter. but can't we please have all 3? lol
Tia06/23/2006 01:13 pm
this one's got my vote
Kawaki06/23/2006 10:30 am
I'm seriously torn. You're counting reviews over all 3 chapters right? I've got some reviews to do.
Maggie06/23/2006 07:51 am
I still really, really wish there was a world where you would write all three of these. But if I have to choose, this would be my THIRD choice. I love Daddy!Spike fics, but it would take a bit of disbelief to think that a 3,000 year old person could be recognizable as our Spike. Don't get me wrong, though! I'd totally read this if you decided to write it. But schizo Spike seems to have more interesting possibilities to me -- and ones that don't take quite the same suspension of disbelief.

Thanks in advance for whatever you decide to do!
cheekybint06/23/2006 07:31 am
oh please continue this one...the plot seems fresher and while there is always room for angst it doesn't seem like it would be too terribly heavy...i like the way it reads so far and i really want to see the character of lyra develope and learn more about spike's past
jl198006/23/2006 07:14 am
awwww...that was heartwarming, very sweet...i like lyra...and apparently she likes buffy, so that's of the good great chapter, my final vote is still for "madness" though
fallen_angel06/23/2006 07:04 am
continue this, this is really good.
Dracon0506/23/2006 04:38 am
If it wasn't obvious the first time i definitely vote for this one to be continued, for much like someone else said the twin one isn't really all that interesting and the whole concept doesn't mesh so well with me.

As for the one with schizo Spike that one has possibilites and if you want to run with that one at another time then go for it but by far this one i like the most.
Morrigan06/23/2006 03:56 am
Oh wow...  This is really different from anything else out there I have read!  Loving this!  I want this one! *kicks and throws mini tantrum* hehe
Harry 4Eyes06/23/2006 02:15 am
Poor Spike, has his hands full with that one...and Lyra as well...lol

Lyra definitely has her daddy wrapped around her little finger....Every bloody Disney movie? *shudder* that's allot of movies...even if we are talking just the animation movies.

Well Spike sounds like a good father but I guess he's had practice right? Wonder if he keeps tabs on all his family.

Lyra sounds like such a cutie, Buffy won't know what hit her .

Though it might be a problem getting the two together, what with Buffy only being a teenager herself um...12 years older than Lyra.

Well defintely still my favourite.
Update soon
Harry
Spikes Slayer206/23/2006 01:16 am
awww i like them all..
SpaceLord06/23/2006 01:09 am
Well this is definetly up there as a contender for which of the three stories I like the best. This one sure has potential and with Spike being alive (undead) for so long sure is going to be interesting with background stories and such.

The story with schizo Spike/William is also very interesting at least judging by the start and I would love to read that too.

The one with the twins is the one that interests me the least, just an excuse for smut IMO and not really that interesting.

So this story and the one with schizo Spike are my top choices, I would really like it if you wrote both of them.
Tonia06/23/2006 12:40 am
Please finish this one! Please!!!
golddrake06/23/2006 12:01 am
great chapter. I love this story, I don't know that I have a favorite of the 3 stories, but I think I'm just slightly more interested in the twins then this story, then Intolerable Beauty. But it really is almost to close to call. They all rock.