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| Fumbling Towards Ecstasy by TalesofSpike |
| Chapter: Chapter 1.03 |
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| Athenewolfe | 07/30/2006 03:18 pm |
| good chappie - i love your writing style! i live the spike and dawn interaction and looking orward to the next chapter |
Thank you, honey!
I think my style's changed quite a bit since I started this series, hopefully for the better, but it still seems like when I proof read the chapters before I post them here I still wind up playing with bits and pieces.
ME seemed to build the foundation for a lovely relationship between Spike and Dawn, but then smashed it down before it came close to reaching its potential. I wanted to try to make that right. Glad it works for you. |
| jl1980 | 07/19/2006 10:26 pm |
i feel better now...that conversation was therapeutic...poor dawnie..something tells me brandon wont be too freaked by the whole key thing...  great chapter |
Thanks, honey.
They both know pretty much where the other is coming from, and they care about each other. They really don't want to hurt each other. |
| vladt | 06/26/2006 07:36 pm |
| very good read. loved the spike&dawn talk. thanks for the fine read. |
| Thanks, honey! Spike really does have a pretty good idea what Dawn has been through. |
| Lou | 06/25/2006 03:58 pm |
| Lovely natural dialogue. |
| Thank you, honey! I'm glad you liked it. |
| Bigbird | 06/25/2006 06:31 am |
| Again? |
| I don't think you're alone in this problem. I've had a few duplicate commemnts lately. Don't worry about it. |
| kim | 06/25/2006 04:02 am |
| Awwwww..... |
| Thank you, honey! |
