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| Intolerable Beauty by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: I'm Not Crazy |
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| Emilee | 07/18/2006 11:26 am |
| I'm impressed with this story. You've certainly made Spike/William an enigma. I wouldn't be surprised if there was something nasty in his past priod to Angelus. Giles is a rat bastard. And he has the audacity to call vampires souless. I can't wait to see where you'll go from here with this. As much as I find the split personality interesting, I'm kinda hoping for an eventual merge. AND I can't wait to see how the spuffy fits in, b/c Will seems way too childlike to develop much beyond puppy love, I could see Spike developing the adult feelings. I'm interested in the apparent difference in emotional maturity as well. I'd put Will at about 10-12, definitely pre-pubescent whereas Spike seems to be the more adult. Excellent start, can't wait for more. |
| deedo | 06/30/2006 03:34 pm |
I'm glad you decided to continue this story as well, I couldn't really choose which I liked more
I totally love Will
looking forward to read more |
| Robyn | 06/30/2006 12:00 am |
I love the protectiveness of Willow and Buffy for Will and Buffy chewing out Giles for his unapologetic demands. I really like the innocent sweetness of Will and Spike’s reason for Will being out most of the time. Thank you for the update. I am so glad that you are also continuing this story, I love the possibilities that the dual personalities provides and I am eager to see where you go with this.  |
| julia | 06/29/2006 06:04 pm |
| Well, here you have the most reviews for this story, on spuffyrealm its "carefully everywhere descending". which one are you going to continue? Personally, i think this one is the best. i hope you decide to pick this one and update soon! its a great story with a ton of potential |
| madforspike | 06/29/2006 05:12 pm |
| Hello! I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this fic. I keep checking every day for updates! I can't wait to see what happens with the whole Buffy/Spike/Will issue. |
| Pulchra | 06/28/2006 06:11 am |
| awwwwwwwwwww! this is sooo sweet! love William/spike! ;-) *hugs* You do the william/spike thing really well! |
| fallen_angel | 06/28/2006 04:52 am |
| I've been waiting for this update! Now if I could have some Carefully Everywhere Descending too, it'd make my day! |
| Harry 4Eyes | 06/28/2006 04:05 am |
Whoa William could give Andrew a run for money on the nerd factor, only not nearly as annoying, almost childlike really. but I guess that's the point.
Xander and William defintely going to be good friends, Very similar in nature, Also he sounds like he'll get along with Willow with her brainiac, and Buffy's inner Slayer need to protect will probably want to coddle him to death.
I can't wait for Joyce's reaction, she'll probably mother him. Wonder if Dawn will be around.
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 06/27/2006 10:37 pm |
| William is so sweet! I always love William ^.^ |
| Dar | 06/27/2006 06:43 pm |
| Spike's inner child is out to play in Will. Can't wait for Joyce's reaction to everything. Good Chapter |
| RJ | 06/27/2006 06:38 pm |
| Will's really cute, you've created an interesting character. I'm a little squicked at the idea of him being involved in any Spuffy though, since he seems mentally a little younger than the rest of the scoobies. |
| jl1980 | 06/27/2006 06:30 pm |
| awwww...i just love will..hate giles, though...and like buffy, hating angel a bit less now another excellent chapter, i very much enjoyed it...now that will is staying with buffy things should get *really* interesting!! |
| SpaceLord | 06/27/2006 04:16 pm |
| Gotta love the Spike/Will character. I'm a little confused aobut how old Will is? I mean the way he acts and his interest I would peg him as being 14-15 tops if even that. How old was he when he was turned? I know he's suposed to be innocent but he's acting real young is that cause of Angelus torture or was he like that before? |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 06/27/2006 03:43 pm |
| Good chapter.Update soon.Will is still so sweet and childlike.He's so cute. |
