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| When a Slayer Cries by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Something Sad and Blue |
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| Athenewolfe | 07/28/2006 11:18 am |
| good chapter sweetie - now I know i knew this but why does spike have his soul - because Dru was insane? Little confused by that but sure I just missed something. Enjoyed meeting William and looking forward to more! |
nope...it will be explained later  |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 07/22/2006 06:20 pm |
Yep ... I'm finally getting to the review posting here. You know that I loved this gift as you sent it to me while it was being written.
You warmed my heart and encouraged me with this tender gift, and I love it. Thank you so much.
The start of this is awesome. I always love it when Anya is all with the knowledge and is respected more. Yeah, she is blunt, but there are ways to work around that (I remember how you do it later in the story, and I liked that). |
Thank you sweetie, the gift was given with sincerity for all you have done for me  |
| Cordykitten | 07/21/2006 07:23 am |
| Trying to do some catching up.. and because this one is finished now, I started reading :-D ~ After Something Blue.. and Spike doesn't take it so well? Not talking that's just not Spike like. And Xander? Very cruel indeed. And Spike doesn't act like himself too. Anya noticed something when Spike mentioned the name of the demon. Uh-huh.. Spike's demon is in danger to be killed? I like this Anya here, she knows a lot. Xander is just at his worst. :-D Love the first chapter, now on to the rest. |
Thank you for taking the time to review  |
| VWalk | 07/18/2006 04:02 pm |
| I can already tell that I'm going to really love this story. I like the way you're opening up Anya's character. Great characterization of everyone. |
| Thank you, I love Anya and always believed she was under written in the show. |
| sirc | 07/16/2006 09:07 am |
I love it  |
Thank you  |
| Cassie | 07/13/2006 07:04 am |
| great start |
| Thank you |
| Verda | 07/07/2006 06:40 am |
| Amazing story. It's imaginative and very well written, I love the concept of Spike still having his soul. Now what's Harris going to say? Anyone got a gag! Thanks for the great read. |
Thank you so much.  |
| Robyn | 07/05/2006 12:18 am |
| I really like that Giles and Buffy finally realized that Anya might have some useful information, and I loved her information about Spike having a soul. Buffy's comment to Xander concerning his delusions was so well deserved. |
Thank you, I appreciate it  |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 07/04/2006 03:15 pm |
| Ohhhhhh, I love William! He's so sweet and I'm usually all with the protectiveness of him too! |
He is sweet  |
| Delicia | 07/04/2006 10:28 am |
| Ooh, I'm loving this! I'm enjoying helpful!Anya, it's great when she has something to contribute! Can't wait to see what happens with William/Spike! |
This one is actually finished...so I can update quickly. |
| Neart | 07/04/2006 09:43 am |
| wow, ingriguing start. Gread idea with the souls and love that Anya is being taken seriously. |
| I like Anya, I think she could have said so much if they'd bothered to ask her. |
| Irina | 07/04/2006 12:04 am |
Wonderful start, Jack! Can't wait to read more!  |
Thank you so much  |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 07/03/2006 11:21 pm |
awww.. love it!! cant wait to see what happens!  |
Thank you, you won't have long to wait  |
| vladt | 07/03/2006 11:03 pm |
| excellent chapter. love anya. speaking of anya, xander's death would improve her existence. thanks for the fine read. |
I've already done the death of xander fic! LOL...but nice guess  |
| Tamara | 07/03/2006 10:25 pm |
Another great story! *bounces up and down*
Never settle , Anya! |
She will learn that  |
| Morrigan | 07/03/2006 10:18 pm |
| Hmm...  Interesting take.  Looking forward to seeing where the rest goes. |
Thank you...I hope you enjoy the ride  |
| Irishrose | 07/03/2006 10:04 pm |
| Squeeee!! A William!fic. Oh yummy, yummy, yummy. |
lol...glad to be of service  |
| fanxstitch | 07/03/2006 09:25 pm |
| Great story and premise, please continue with this. |
I have already finished it, so yes...I will continue  |
| TammyDevil666 | 07/03/2006 09:19 pm |
| Okay, this is an interesting start. I can see that Xander isn't very nice in this one like he was in the others, but hopefully that changes. I don't like him when he's such a jerk. I'm also a bit worried about the character death. I usually try to avoid stories that have that as a warning, but I liked your other ones and decided to give it a chance. I just hope it wouldn't be anyone really important. Anyway, I'm interested to read more=) |
I hope you continue to enjoy this story  |
| gotkona | 07/03/2006 08:32 pm |
| This sounds wonderful. |
Thank you kindly  |
| Tonia | 07/03/2006 07:51 pm |
| Poor William! He's forced out of hiding only to have to put up with the Scoobies. Please tell me that someone will smack Xander? |
Guess you'll just have to read to find out  |
| Dar | 07/03/2006 07:35 pm |
| I'm thrilled to read a story with Anya getting a little respect. Like this story atmosphere. |
Thank you...I like Anya  |
| jl1980 | 07/03/2006 07:22 pm |
oh wow...i'm breathless, speechless..this is simply incredible..my heart is breaking from this story, so sad and beautiful...love your treatment of anya so far...do i sense maybe anya/giles later? that would be awesome!! excellent fic, i'm hooked already  |
| Now JL...that would be telling! lol. Thank you for your very kind words. |
| Bigbird | 07/03/2006 07:16 pm |
| Excellent start will add this to my favorites list and wait for more!! |
Thank you, I promise not to keep you waiting too long  |
| slaymesoftly | 07/03/2006 06:59 pm |
| Nice beginning. Can't wait to see where you go with this. |
Thank you. It's an interesting journey  |
| Jace Nox | 07/03/2006 06:41 pm |
| oooo this story is heating up, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
You won't have to wait long I promise  |
| Isabel | 07/03/2006 06:26 pm |
| Great start. I'm so happy they're treating Anya decently for a change. And stupid Xander. God the boy is annoying. He makes me want to pull my hair out in frustration. I'm really liking this story so far, like all of your stories =) |
Thank you...you just made my day  |
| HPfan | 07/03/2006 06:17 pm |
| What a beginning! You've got me totally hooked now. So glad to see Giles and the others starting to understand that Anya may well know more than they ever thought she might. Now, if only they could teach Xander to show a little respect. Might try a good slap upside the head to see if someone can knock a little sense into him. lol Wanna see more of William, so update soon, please! |
| Thank you so much. Do you really think Xander can learn at this late stage? |
| 07/03/2006 04:23 pm |
yay! i'm *so glad *somebody* remember st xander's own history of attempted rape!
here's hoping anya realizes she can do *so* much better! |
Yes Xander did seem to get away with a lot, didn't he?  |
| Azelma | 07/03/2006 04:15 pm |
This seems like it's going to be a great story. I've always had a soft spot for William. So adorable!
Can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm so glad you have Anya treated properly by the Scoobies.  |
I really like Anya and think she was much under-used in the actual show  |
| kim | 07/03/2006 03:51 pm |
Interesting premise, though it's a shame it takes all that for Buffy just to be decent to him. Once more, the soul makes it all okay for her.
I like Anya getting her proper recognition. |
Yes, but remember she has been trained to be that way  |
| Richard | 07/03/2006 03:47 pm |
| Brilliant. |
| Thank you |
| Karyn | 07/03/2006 03:21 pm |
| Awesome beginning jack!! loved it!!! |
Thank you so much...and thank's again for the awesome banner  |
| Pin1 | 07/03/2006 03:07 pm |
| Love the new story. I really like this Anya and appreciate what she can cotnribute to the group. Hopefully, she will escape Xander, who continues to be obnoxious. Looking forward to more. |
Thank you, I really like Anya too  |
| golddrake | 07/03/2006 02:49 pm |
| great start. I'm really looking forward to more. |
Thank you, I think I can update this at least three times a week  |
| redwulf50 | 07/03/2006 02:36 pm |
| Bloody excellent fic |
Thank you...but the prise is getting higher!  |
| Harry 4Eyes | 07/03/2006 02:28 pm |
So does this Lawson bloke actually exist? I'm sure i've heard of him in other fics as well. And his parents should know better than call him Lawson.
So Spike kept his soul but was beaten to submission...wonder why Angelcakes kept that little tidbit to himself...aswell as the Lawson turning...I see plenty of Angel Bashing in this fic too.
So Jackers another story...don't you have a couple you still need to complete? But I get the feeling those two are coming to an end soon.
So off to Ebay for Willow. amazing what you can find on there.
Well Jackers another promising fic.
Update soon
Harry. |
In Angel season 5 we met Lawson. His name is actually Sam Lawson and I promise to give you more information on him in the coming chapters. Nope not ending Penny and Paradox soon...at least I don't think so  |
| UncagedMuse | 07/03/2006 02:03 pm |
| Excellent beginning! |
Thank you, it's a labour of love |
| maryperk | 07/03/2006 01:48 pm |
| Cool |
| Thanks as always Mary. |