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| Fumbling Towards Ecstasy by TalesofSpike |
| Chapter: Chapter 1.12 |
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| Athenewolfe | 07/30/2006 04:55 pm |
| ohhhh go dawnie! way to go and very well done willow |
Thanks, honey!
Dawn often sees things rather more clearly than Buffy does. |
| jl1980 | 07/24/2006 01:34 am |
loved dawnie's reaction to willow...she said just what she deserved to have to hear...and i love how spike and buffy let willow know that while they were inclined to show her a bit more patience, they were backing dawnie up..can't wait to see what buffy will have to say to her friend now  |
Thank you, honey!
I just wrote it the way that seemed right. Buffy has a responsibility to ensure Dawn feels safe in her own home. Though, IMO she should have realised that when Willow got Dawn chased by a demon and her arm broken. Friendship only stretches so far. |
| vladt | 07/05/2006 05:17 pm |
| great read, thanks. dawn was fantastiic. hopefully, buffy can reinforce what dawn, tara, giles and spike tried to tell red. not that she will hear. |
Thanks!
Dawn has her better moments! Sometimes they even make up for her bratty ones. |
| MarzBar | 07/04/2006 10:33 pm |
| Wow! Dawn told Willow the truth! |
Thank you!
Dawn has this habit of doing that. |
| Lou | 07/04/2006 08:30 am |
| Wow - Dawn kicked ass in that chapter! Willow's still full of herself then. |
Thank you!
Dawn sometimes seems more Joyce's daughter than Buffy does, especially when it comes to knowing where to draw the line. |
| kim | 07/04/2006 04:09 am |
Aaack, the first review I made didn't show up - the sites's moving incredibly slow. Trying again...
Good for Dawn. I always preferred her straight shooting to Buffy's placation of everyone. I would have told Willow the same things...thrown her out long ago if she wouldn't pay rent. The arrogance, delusion, and amoral attitude is just sick. Right now, I'm hoping she keeps trying to magic herself better and rids the world of her meddling.
And Buffy needs to give her final say, or Willow is just going to try to fix everyone else so Buffy will be her friend again, since she thinks Buffy can't think for herself.
Poor little puppy. Hopefully, it's young enough to forget the trauma later.
I hope Giles has learned some things, too. Like it or not, he put himself in the fatherly position when he started caring for the kids more than a "Watcher should". He needs to step up and own that responsibility now. |
Thank you, honey!
I got slightly confused when I got the email notification for your first review but then I had no way to actually reply, so I'm glad you took the time to try again.
Yep, Dawn is definitely the straight-talker of the family. Buffy will have her say. How much Willow will actually listen to, since if she was going to take any of it to heart she'd have to actually admit she'd been in the wrong, is another matter...
Poor puppy, yep, but it has a new home now.
Giles is learning that he doesn't know the Scoobies as well as he might have thought... Or rather they have changed, but his perception of them has remained static.
And Xander, he just might surprise you... |
