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| When a Slayer Cries by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Is that an Angel at the Door? |
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| Athenewolfe | 07/28/2006 11:58 am |
| ohhh i liked williams statement of all the facts - how he pointed out the weaknesses that everyone had such as angel refusing to find out the facts of his soul. The Anya parts were brilliant I loved them very much - she is such a great character! |
Thanks sweetness, I would have to agree about Anya, I do love her  |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 07/22/2006 06:53 pm |
Go William. I loved the last line of this just as much now as the first time I read it. "was he not in bed with you?" That sums up Angel/Angelus to a t. He doesn't accept responsibility for anything.
I remember that I adored Anya more with each chapter. You bring her out of her "shell" into a more warm and well rounded character as the chapters go on.
Another fine chapter.
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| Thank you so much sweetie, I'm getting warm fuzzies |
| Cordykitten | 07/21/2006 07:59 am |
| Anya is more helpful as the rest of the Scoobies. A lots of insights from William. He is the better man (demon) from his family. And he's right too: Angelus doesn't have seemed to care to find out more about the curse. Or he risked it willingly. :-D William saw this right. |
| Thank you |
| sirc | 07/16/2006 09:52 am |
| I just love the way you write everyone. So very true.. |
| Thank you, I have to admit to having a real dislike to a number of characters and I tend to be a little harsh with them |
| Cassie | 07/13/2006 07:05 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
| Delicia | 07/07/2006 12:29 pm |
Lovely! Anya comes through with the big knowledge again, yay!! I enjoy hearing the backstory coming from William's perspective. He's making some very good points! Thanks |
| Thank you too |
| Verda | 07/07/2006 07:17 am |
| Great developement of Anya's character. Always thought she was capable of more if they ever wanted to develope her further. Liam was truly the real "bad rude man". Another amazing chapter. |
| Thank you, I do love Anya |
| HPfan | 07/05/2006 09:24 pm |
| Wonderful chapter. Love all these revelations about demons, souls and vampires. Sure doesn't show Angel in a very good light. Hope Buffy is taking notes. Anya is one smart cookie! And what can I say - just love William. Gotta hurry now and read the new update. |
| Thank you so much for your very kind words |
| Karyn | 07/05/2006 06:30 pm |
| awesome chapter jack! love it love it love it! |
| Thank you sweetie, I find angst sooo much easier than smut! |
| Badia | 07/05/2006 05:15 pm |
| I love this fic. Finally a Buffy who realizes that early that her frriends and watcher cannot be trusted completely. Plz write more. |
| Don't write her friends and watcher off yet |
| vladt | 07/05/2006 04:48 pm |
| great update. thanks. love anya's growing confidence. the last question is a wonderful way to end the chapter. thanks for the fine read. |
| Thank you for your kind words |
| Bridget | 07/05/2006 10:49 am |
| Another great story. I like how you have brought William to the forefront with Spike still present. I am also glad that you have made Anya a integral part of this story. Yeah you. |
| Thank you so much...you just made my day. |
| Neart | 07/05/2006 09:39 am |
| Willow is scary when she wants to 'fix' it and make it better, and thank goodness your Giles is less blind to Anya's knowledge. Lovin' it, keep it comin' |
| Willow thinks if she can fix the outside she doesn't have to think about the inside ! |
| Bigbird | 07/05/2006 06:45 am |
| Ah Anya appreciation always of the good. Good chapter too. |
| Thank you, Anya plays a large part in this fic |
| Lou | 07/05/2006 04:37 am |
| This is a great way of putting over all the points we've all longed to make. An excellent Anya too. |
| Thank you so much |
| Harry 4Eyes | 07/05/2006 04:07 am |
Well that title won;t do, because there is no one at the door :-p
Ahhh the eternal question why was Angelous with a soul so different than Liam when alive? Yet Liam was not much different after he was turned just with even less morals.
I'd have a longer reply but the heat has fried my brain it seems, I can't think straight.
But still loving it Jackes
Update soon
Harry |
Heat? But you're a Brit! England doesn't get actual heat  |
| kim | 07/05/2006 02:49 am |
| Really a time to be blunt, and he's living up to it, as is Anya. Buffy needs to accept that she never knew the real Angel. They never discussed who he was inside, or the past that made him all he is today. |
| There are a lot of truths to come out |
| Robyn | 07/05/2006 12:51 am |
| I am really enjoying this story and I love the encouragement and respect that Giles and Buffy are starting to show Anya. I think Buffy is going to get a whole new perspective of Angel, and I loved William's question to Buffy, it's something both she and Giles needs to realize. |
| There will be a lot of truths coming out |
| Richard | 07/04/2006 11:47 pm |
| Well, that was interesting. Anya is certainly an underused character. And it makes sense that whatever she did to attract D'Hoffryn's attention required magic. Anya's turning of Olaf into a troll certainly points that way. |
| She has spoken of it during the show. |
| fanxstitch | 07/04/2006 11:40 pm |
| Very excellent story with a lot of depth and truth to it. Please keep this up and update often. I'm also a big William fan. |
| Thank you so much |
| letitia | 07/04/2006 10:50 pm |
| I am just loving Anya once again. I am glad she is taking Willow precautions... Someone should. And also glad that they are actually TALKING to William and listening. Great chapter. |
| Thank you |
| Dar | 07/04/2006 10:27 pm |
| Buffy can't bop William on the nose like she did Spike..Can't wait to see how she deals. Great Chapter |
| Yes she certainly can't do that |
| Jace Nox | 07/04/2006 09:42 pm |
| Ohhhhh Go William! |
| LOL...yes indeed |
| Nichole | 07/04/2006 09:32 pm |
| Ok i'm SSOOOOOO loving this story i await with baited breath for more..i'm loving how William is telling the story...oh hope giles don't forget the disinvite spell..look forward to more soon..N |
| Giles did the spell, then questioned Anya. |
| Irina | 07/04/2006 08:30 pm |
| I loved how perceptive Anya was in this chapter, good on her for ruining Willow's plans to 'fix' things. Great conversation between William and Buffy, it was very insightful. Fantastic chapter. |
| Thank you...playing God is fun |
| golddrake | 07/04/2006 08:22 pm |
| great chapter. I'm really enjoying this story and I look forward to more. |
| Thank you so much. |
| Isabel | 07/04/2006 08:08 pm |
| Great end to this chapter. "was he not in the bed with you?" I loved that. It's so true. Angel never took responsibility for anything. Wanker. |
| No he really didn't |
| duke6665 | 07/04/2006 08:01 pm |
| great chapter. loved anya telling giles that SHE wrote the spell |
| Well...she did! LOL |
| jl1980 | 07/04/2006 07:42 pm |
| he is *so* right! i love your explanation of vampires and their demons...very interesting and makes perfect sense...again, i love the respect with which you're portraying anya..she was so much more than they ever gave her credit for...excellent story, can't wait for your next update |
| Thank you, I have always been angered that Anya's 'expertise' wasn't explored. |
| Tamara | 07/04/2006 07:29 pm |
Great Giles/Anya interaction. They always worked well together. Anya's pretty smart for realizing what Willow would do.
Good description of the difference between Angel with a soul and without. It should be a greatly enlightened Buffy that sees Angel again. |
| It will at that! |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 07/04/2006 07:01 pm |
| *looks around then pounces William* |
| William screams like a girl and runs to Buffy for protection. |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 07/04/2006 06:59 pm |
| what does that mean?? |
| doesn't he hold some responsibility too? |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 07/04/2006 06:58 pm |
| Good chapter.Update soon.William is so sweet. |
| Thank you...I will try |
| redwulf50 | 07/04/2006 06:57 pm |
Turning to Buffy, William spoke earnestly. “I don’t mean to hurt you, Miss Buffy, but Angel had one hundred years to discover all the facts of his curse. He did nothing at all to ensure that he was safe. He then allowed you, an innocent child, to blame yourself for the loss of his soul and all the bad that came with it. I really don’t mean to be crude, but was he not in the bed with you?”
Seee we aren't supposed to ask questions like that they show his assedness..... I mean his highass.... I mean his Highness in a very unproper light. |
| rofl...idiot! |
