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| Fixing the Factors by ImmortallySpuffy |
| Chapter: Day 11 |
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| Verda | 08/04/2006 02:49 am |
| Hell you know this is grrreat! And was Loren trying to hit on Spike? or does he just appreciate beauty no matter what form it comes in? See ya, gotta see if she kisses him. BFN Love this! *hugs* |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 07/26/2006 05:02 pm |
OUCH! Getting hit while trying to kiss someone would hurt like heck. The antics were amusing though. Stake ... ROFL ... That's a good one.
I loved Pete calling Spike Lord Jamison. {grins} I know I told you guys that before, and I do love it. The whole scene at the magic shop in LA was priceless with the soul and the mating, etc.
Them meeting Pike and Buffy seeing her father with another pregnant woman were great additions to the timeline. I felt sad for Buffy to see Hank like that. I'm glad that Spike allowed his more "WIlliam" side out to comfort Buffy.
I absolutely adored the addition of Lorne into the mix. He fits so well, especially with what they needed to know. Spike's choice of song ... {sighs softly} ... I can just hear his voice singing it, and it gives me good goosebumps.
Score one for Cordy dusting Angel. LOL
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| Hee, it just seemed a great song to use, and Lorne is sooo much fun! |
| Pam | 07/23/2006 09:27 pm |
| Update soon. I need to know what happens with the kiss and the rest of the story. |
| rofl, sorry about that, next chapter is up! Thanks for reviewing! Hope you enjoy the rest! |
| Bookchick of the Novel Clan | 07/21/2006 04:03 pm |
| Yummy, I needed that. Great chappie! |
| *grin* Thanks! |
| Robyn | 07/19/2006 02:55 am |
Cordy staking Angel really left me laughing. I enjoyed their hunt for information in L.A. and how in cumulated with Spike singing 'their' song to Buffy. The emotional impact of Buffy seeing her dad was fantastic. Thanks for the lovely update.  |
| Thanks so much, we didn't want a total angstfest but wanted it emotional as well, glad you liked! |
| fanxstitch | 07/13/2006 08:42 pm |
| This is wonderful and I hope you'll update soon. |
| Thanks! next ones up! lol |
| Cassie | 07/13/2006 07:19 am |
| Great chapter |
| Thanks! |
| vladt | 07/12/2006 11:29 pm |
| fantastic read, thank you. cordie staked angel, hilarious! and buffy taking the chance to kiss him again! wonderful read, thanks again |
| Thanks! |
| vladt | 07/12/2006 11:29 pm |
| fantastic read, thank you. cordie staked angel, hilarious! and buffy taking the chance to kiss him again! wonderful read, thanks again |
| Thanks! |
| vladt | 07/12/2006 11:28 pm |
| fantastic read, thank you. cordie staked angel, hilarious! and buffy taking the chance to kiss him again! wonderful read, thanks again |
| *grin* Yup, it's stake angel week here at IS, hope you enjoyed the show! lmao!!! |
| Esther | 07/12/2006 10:35 pm |
| Ooh, this was awesome!! Kudos for adding Pike, Hank S., and the Fang Gang!! Aww, felt sorry for Pike, too. The rest was just fantab!! More, please!!! |
| Thanks! yeah, it's sad when the cool guy isn't cool anymore...lol, Thanks!! |
| DizzyB | 07/12/2006 09:01 pm |
| Hah! Absolutely love the repeated Angel stakeage...and it never gets old! Isn't that funny? More, soon? PLEASE! |
| lmao!! yeah, you'd think we'd get bored staking angel...but nope, doesn't happen! *grin* |
| redwulf50 | 07/12/2006 07:25 pm |
So how are you going to skip the kiss this time????  |
| *evil laughter* wouldn't you like to know...well, now you can, next chapters up! lol |
| letitia | 07/12/2006 04:44 pm |
| what a way to start the day both times.... Hopefully she won't be head butted this time when he wakes. Great tidbit on the soul and what is up with Lord Jamison?? Spike is keeping some big secrets. |
| *grin* yup, he's got some secrets, hopefully we'll learn them soon! thanks for the review! |
| duke6665 | 07/12/2006 03:42 pm |
| lol so it was cordy's turn huh? great chapter |
| *grin* we like to share! lol |
| Mark Evans | 07/12/2006 02:52 pm |
| Thanks for this chapter . I loved the randomness of it, Pike? I'm looking forward to the next installment. |
| *grin* i hope randomness is a good thing, we just don't want you to get bored..lol Thanks! |
| Harry 4Eyes | 07/12/2006 02:04 pm |
Gotta give the girls her kudo's still not given up even after she got her nose head butted last time....must be love..lol
Yeah for Cordy, she definitely needs a to dust Angel for the future treatment she gets from him with the headaches she receives from her visions yet still not getting the credit she deserves,and then ending up in a coma, Angel supposed to be in love with her but snogs Buffy first time he see's her and then moving onto wolfgirl , you know for someone who is supposed to be in love with Buffy he's dated quite a few girls in the meantime.
Hmm...wonder what's with the lord Jamison all about...big improvement from Lord Prat...as is the given name for William for some reason.
I'm surprised that Spike didn't make a big deal about when her father made an appearence.
Well another interesting chapters, they are going to work their arses off with the amout of tasks they have to complete by the end of the day.
Loving it
Update soon
Harry |
Yup, Cordy needed some stakage...lol
*shudders* yup, we like Jamison better too
*grin* more about the looping day soon* |
| Neart | 07/12/2006 01:51 pm |
| great chappie, all that 'Angel dust' just give me a high. |
| rofl, hope you 'come down' long enough for the next chapter! |
| Emily | 07/12/2006 01:19 pm |
| Great chapter I love the way you made Buffy's attempted kiss into mayhem, and you were able to write that mayhem very clearly. Also, YAY LORNE!!! Lorne is one of my fav characters, and it was great to see him. Can't wait for more, keep it up |
| Thanks! glad you could see the mayhem ...had lots of fun with that one! |
| Pin1 | 07/12/2006 01:14 pm |
Excellent chapter - full of great info! Love the cliff hanger endings.  ) |
| Thanks! glad you're enjoying it! |
| nightshift | 07/12/2006 11:22 am |
| I'm really enjoying this story. Complex plotlines, and well written and beta'd. Angel dustage is always of the good. Repeated Angel dustage is even better. |
Thanks!
rofl, yup sometimes the plotlines are so complex we have trouble keeping it all straight, especially since there's 3 of us. |
| jodi | 07/12/2006 10:53 am |
| Another fab chapter. LOL. |
| Thanks you! glad you liked! |
| MarzBar | 07/12/2006 10:47 am |
| Is she going to get her nose bonked by Spike this time? What factors are left to fix before their time can move on? More story please. |
| Thanks! hopefully more explaination soon! |
| golddrake | 07/12/2006 09:47 am |
| great chapter |
| Thanks! |
| Tamara | 07/12/2006 08:53 am |
| Yeah, kiss him already! |
| *giggles followed by an evil laugh* hope you enjoy the next part! |
| Emilee | 07/12/2006 08:21 am |
| Finally some romantic action!! Although that wake up from this morning was kinda funny. I would think that Buffy could tell a stake from a 'stake'. Texture and all. That was the cutest blonde moment ever. Interesting development with the soul. I liked your take on it, frankly something I never understood about the show was why a soul should feel guilty when a demon was responsible for the actions. I can't wait for the next update. |
| we'll just blame the 'stake from a stake' thing on her just waking up...rofl, Thanks for the great review! |
| Shanna | 07/12/2006 08:20 am |
| Well...you are even more evil with this kissy cliffhanger!!!! Argh!! Great chapter and update. I'm all twitchy, so I need another update asap!!!! |
| Thanks! |
| Shanna | 07/12/2006 08:19 am |
| Well...you are even more evil with this kissy cliffhanger!!!! Argh!! Great chapter and update. I'm all twitchy, so I need another update asap!!!! |
what can i say? we've always been bad! lmao!!
Thanks so much! |
| Lou | 07/12/2006 07:10 am |
| Fabulous chapter! And what a tease you are - I thought we were getting some yum twice there! |
| *grin* yup, we're evil! lol Thanks! |
| pretty_in_fangs | 07/12/2006 07:03 am |
Eeeee! Actually kissage. Such an improvement over almost kissage. ::grin:: This was a great update: all sorts of information and bonding experiences.
And annother Angel dusting. ::smirk:: |
| *giggles* um, we said we were evil right? I put that in the disclaimer? oops, better go add that! *grin* |
| kim | 07/12/2006 06:37 am |
Hey, attempt #2 is working!
Okay, this L.A. day was freaking hilarious!!!!!! Even Cordy's gotten to stake Angel, though she wasn't sure that he was still just Angel. Spike's soul reattached itself, eh? That's a new way to approach it...but, hey, if the Powers want to help out along the loopy day...
And Riley's chip has been activated...nasty, nasty Adam.
And Buffy's dad has a new family...that's always a tough thing to learn about.
Can't wait for the morning! |
| Thanks, yeah, Buffy had a hard time with the dad thing, but she's got support, and we like to share the stakage...it's not nice to not share *grin* |
