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| Breaking Down the Walls by araedhel |
| Chapter: Chapter 17 |
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| Verda | 07/31/2006 03:16 pm |
| Liked that Spike went to Angel and asked for a truce for Buffy's sake, against her father. Why was he there any way? As if he had any right to his opinion. How did he know that Spike was a vamp? Can't wait to see what they're up to. Story's going well, but alot of type-o's. Thanks for the read. |
| Thanks for the review! Sorry about the typ-o's |
| Robyn | 07/31/2006 06:32 am |
| Dawn’s comment to her father about dads always being there was beautiful and funny. I loved Spike’s gifts to Buffy and how she felt about them. I am glad that I still have several chapters to go as I am really looking forward to Spike’s and Angel’s antics. |
| Thanks for the review! |
| vladt | 07/13/2006 10:32 pm |
| fun read, thanks. looking forward to enjoying the "drastic measures." |
| Thanks for the review. |
| duke6665 | 07/12/2006 03:59 pm |
| lol great chapter. can't wait to see what angel and spike do |
| Thanks for the review. |
| lacey | 07/12/2006 11:39 am |
| okay, you really need a beta. this story has way too many mistakes and it tends to be distracting. also, i don't know how hank fits into this. how does he even know about her dating vampires? i'm pretty sure he never took the time to find out and i doubt any of them would have told him. i'm still finding this story doesn't make a whole lot of sense. |
| Thanks for the review. I'll look into getting a beta. Do you ahve any reccomentations? |
