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| Softer World by Constance |
| Chapter: Chapter Five |
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| Robyn | 07/24/2006 03:32 pm |
| I am really enjoying this story. The interaction between Spike and Buffy seems perfect given their past history and the way they have been communicating of late. I really enjoyed Anya's and Dawn's interaction in the bar and what Dawn said to Spike and Buffy out on the terrace. |
| vladt | 07/18/2006 09:55 pm |
| fun read, thank you. don't worry about the lack of negative reviews. there are a couple of reviewers on this site who point out, in great detail,what is wrong with stories. i have yet to find any of their tales to review. thanks for the fine read. |
| Immortal Beloved | 07/18/2006 08:31 pm |
I like your way of getting Buffy and Spike to transition from "the bathroom scene" to having an intimate relationship again. I completely believe that no means no. However, Buffy told Spike "No," a million times and then had sex with him once for each emphatic "No."
Calling Buffy a necropheliac is hillarious. She's a nymphomaniac necropheliac.
And lastly, since you want criticism, you may want to Americanize the American characters' speach. For example, we Americans don't say "snog." We'd say "making out" or "hooking up."
All in all, a nice read so far. |
| Lynda | 07/18/2006 08:08 pm |
| I love the believable way you wrote the characters. I wish Spike and Buffy would have had that kind of epiphany. Please continue. |
| Yzba | 07/18/2006 12:04 pm |
| Looking forward to reading more, |
| Tamara | 07/18/2006 08:56 am |
| Apocalypses have such a bad way of killing a good mood. |
| Sharon | 07/18/2006 08:48 am |
I have to say, if the show had gone in the direction you're taking this story, I do believe that Buffy and Spike would act very much like your portrayals. I'm liking this story very much.
And, if you want meaner reviews, start writing worse, it's your own fault! |
| kim | 07/18/2006 05:50 am |
Gotta give Spike points for trying...how can he be sure of his footing, where Buffy's concerned...but she's making efforts, so...
So much for more romance in bed...more apocalypse talk to deal with. The mood might be ruined, but they can still cuddle. |
