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| Blood Bound by jl1980 |
| Chapter: Dangerous Bond |
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| Robyn | 08/06/2006 07:41 am |
| What a frightening ending particularly knowing that the demon possessing Buffy’s body has every intention of killing Dawn. I hope Willow will have to answer for the problems she has caused. |
yeah, that could be bad...  willow may not be able to help so much, but it should all work out in the end  |
| Spikez_tart | 08/01/2006 08:11 pm |
| Totally unfair, JL. |
| lol |
| Athenewolfe | 07/30/2006 11:26 am |
| poor dawn - she has no idea what they have planned for her to they - love the explanation - hope everything works out |
| thanx, glad you like it |
| gotkona | 07/28/2006 03:06 pm |
| more please.did i miss 64 and 65? |
| umm...maybe...i don't know |
| Joyce | 07/28/2006 11:22 am |
| More theories that make since. You are brilliant! |
| thanx so much |
| Morrigan | 07/27/2006 12:53 am |
| Ahh! Hurry up! Dawn to the rescue... Er.. Spike to the rescue... Oh, where's Joyce with a shovel when you need her? |
| lol...yeah that would be good |
| kim | 07/25/2006 12:50 pm |
| Eeeep!! |
| lol |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 07/25/2006 02:51 am |
| Go save them Dawn! Then finally find some way to get rid of the bitchy thing!! |
| thanx |
| margaret | 07/24/2006 11:30 pm |
| ok can't wait to see how you get them out of this! every time i get my hopes up , they're dashed. love the story |
| lol...glad you like it |
| HPfan | 07/24/2006 06:34 pm |
| Okay, this is just... cruel. Every time we think our heroes might be just about home free, you hit 'em with another whammy. You do know how to write a roller coaster of a plot! Love the way you're revealing the secret of Dawn's being the key. Hope you update soon. I don't deal well with suspense. It takes a real toll on my fingernails. lol |
| come on....did you really think the slayer was gonna lay down without a fight? thanx for the review |
| spike's mrs | 07/24/2006 04:49 pm |
| ps why is chapter coming up as 66 i counted them thinking i'd miss two i only counted 64 |
| i accidentally posted this one three times but i fixed it already hehe |
| spike's mrs | 07/24/2006 04:47 pm |
| it doesn;t seem to looking that great for spike at the moment but i know your going to fix it so i'm not worry about spike i just hope dawn doesn't get hurt first as alway great update jl gave yourself another A+ plus i think a gold star this time LOL sorry that just my inner teacher coming out well done though |
| thanx, glad you enjoy it so much |
| Nikkole | 07/24/2006 04:44 pm |
| Crap. was it Buffy or the Demon that gave the command not to listen to any other command. This is SO not of the good! |
| well, it was buffy...but it doesnt really matter now because now he's not bound to obey *anyone* .. the claim is equal, so the whole mind control thing is out, either way.... thanx for the review |
| Verda | 07/24/2006 04:43 pm |
| That's why Dawn can calm her, makes sense. Very scared for Spike right now, she can do so much damage and not kill him. Very angsty chapter. She's so evil. Great job! |
| thanx, glad you're enjoying it |
| vladt | 07/24/2006 01:38 pm |
| well, she's back. come on spike do something. great update, thank you. |
| he cant do much...but he'll manage to outsmart her yet |
| MarzBar | 07/24/2006 11:10 am |
| I hope I didn't miss anything by not thoroughly reading the three chapters that seem to be the same, just re-posted. Anyway, that was a cliffie ending. When is Spike going to give Buffy a good hiding? More story please. |
| you're right, i fixed it already though thanx for the review |
| Mr_Chaos | 07/24/2006 08:32 am |
Good chapter, but more and more something is bothering me.
Spike has not done a single thing to show how strong he is, how powerful he is...other then stand in the way and let Buffy beat the shit out of him.
I guss my problem is, he is a master vamp, trained by 3 of the most deadly vamps that ever lived. Yet every turn, you've made him helpless. When he should be taunting the demon into becoming rash and stupid, he sits there and takes it.
Yes, I get that the bond is powerful. And I get that Spike loves Buffy. But he isn't, pardon the expression, Xander.
I have a horrible feeling that in the end, Buffy and Dawn will beat back the demon, and Spike will be reduced to, as he has said in the story itself, a ponce, a wanker, a sniveling mama's boy.
It's a great story, well written and with twists and turns. I enjoy reading it. But there is no much of Spike being a victim, too much of him being passive. Give the vamp his manhood back soon and maybe, jsut maybe, you can bring his charecter back the way it should be. Otherwise, I think, while being a great story, it will end up lacking. |
| i understand your point...thus far though he hasnt had much of an opportunity to stand up for himself, due to the power of the claim...and you will be surprised as to how spike comes through in the end...hope you enjoy the rest |
| Nikkole | 07/24/2006 07:56 am |
| I left the review on the first of the triple chapter. |
| thanx |
| Emilee | 07/24/2006 07:26 am |
| First off, excellent chapter. She had a bit of a James Bond moment didn't she? You can tell she's an ancient primordial demon, or she'd know that you never soliloquey about your evil plans b/c then you get beat. ;) Can't wait for the next update. |
| lol..so right... glad you're enjoying it |
| Lou | 07/24/2006 07:08 am |
| Triple dose of more nasty - I hope Dawn is smart today. |
| we'll see |
