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| Destiny of One by Yzba |
| Chapter: Two |
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| Rebelbaby | 08/03/2006 03:17 pm |
Keep up the grate wore. I LUV IT. P.S. Update as soon as ya can YzBa!!!!!  : |
| Thanks you so much, once again, I can't say enough how good it feels to know you liked it |
| vladt | 08/02/2006 07:56 pm |
| i thought it would be tough to follow up the excellent first chapter. wow,was i wrong. great read, thank you |
| It's so good to know that people actually enjoy reading this, you can't know how happy you just made me |
| Esther | 08/02/2006 04:26 pm |
| Oh wow, this is gorgeous!! I've got tears flowing right now from remembering that last scene in 'The Gift.' Egads, I can't wait for more! |
| Too know that I was able to move you with this chapter means a lot. Thank you so much!! |
| Bridget | 08/02/2006 02:21 pm |
| Great story. Very nice interpretation of what happened after she jumped. I can't wait to read more. |
| So many thanks for you!!! I always felt that there was something missing in that plotline.. |
| Verda | 08/02/2006 02:34 am |
| A very powerful and emotional chapter. The love and tenderness that he showed for her was wonderful. Sorry that you had trouble with this, I could never do it but it looks like you have talent and you clearly have a story to tell, so let your muse and friends guide you. Wonderful chapter full of possibilities. Thanks for the read. |
| Thanls for the read and the review. It means a lot that you love the chapter and the story! |
| kim | 08/02/2006 02:09 am |
| Whoa...intense. |
| I know, Thanks;) |
