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| Cara Mia by Confused Muse |
| Chapter: Chapter Two |
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| Tasha | 09/24/2005 03:46 am |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/20/2005 @ 10:28 pm
Loved that last line of Chapter 2. Look forward to more of this one. I wonder what the Immortal is up to. Hope he doesn't try to steal Spike.
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| lovesbitca37 | 09/24/2005 03:46 am |
lovesbitca37 09/18/2005 @ 11:40 am
I love it! The last line of ch2 is just perfect  I can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to Spike and how they find out what the Immortal is up to!
Please update!
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| Shehrezade | 09/24/2005 03:45 am |
| Schehrezade 09/17/2005 @ 05:43 pm
Whoa how did I miss this! You're doing a response to my first ever challenge I posted! Awesome and I am enjoying it so much -- write more cos that Immortal is soooo needing sorting!
And that final line CLASSIC! Keep writing
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| Gina | 09/24/2005 03:44 am |
| Gina 09/15/2005 @ 06:00 pm
Ooh, the Immortal's got a dirty little secret! That last line was all Spike! Update soon!
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| Oracleholly | 09/24/2005 03:44 am |
| Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:09 pm
Great last line to Chap 2! lol I see the Immortal's being a bad boy; Spike's going to have to do something about that.
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| Stephanie | 09/24/2005 03:43 am |
| Stephanie 09/13/2005 @ 03:23 pm
LOL - first love the complaint about the genes she ended up with - that was so cute and so dawn. Oh now that last line is so freakin funny. LOL... just pleased to see you ROFL! Fab - good intrique with the Immortal. Need more!
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| Shadowsbabe | 09/24/2005 03:42 am |
| Shadowsbabe 09/12/2005 @ 08:30 pm
"LOL!!!"...That line should go down in fanfiction history.
Too bad Buffy's gonna to kick some major butt in the next chapter.
If I was Dawn, I don't think I'd stick around to watch.
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| vladt | 09/24/2005 03:42 am |
| vladt 09/12/2005 @ 08:18 pm
great start. thanks. love the chapter 2 ending.
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| spike_spetslayer | 09/24/2005 03:41 am |
| spike_spetslayer 09/12/2005 @ 06:12 pm
CM--you just keep making it better and better. Love that line--"not a stake in my pocket" LOLTIP! that is classic! you rock, Girl! now go write some more!
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| ComedyofErrors | 09/24/2005 03:40 am |
| ComedyofErrors 09/12/2005 @ 10:10 am
And what will Buffy say...
Interesting conversation the immortal was having.
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| Vicki | 09/24/2005 03:40 am |
| vicki 09/12/2005 @ 09:26 am
great cliffhanger ending. now please give us more.
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| Mali | 09/24/2005 03:39 am |
| Mali 09/12/2005 @ 04:55 am
O.o Has Buffy realised it's Spike yet? And I have a feeling that he doesn't know how pissed off she's gonna be. *rubs hands together in classic evil genius move*
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| Esther | 09/24/2005 03:39 am |
| Esther 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm
Yipee, he's finally seen her and grabbed her, but don't end it there....need more...please? Oh, the Immortal is up to something....and I hope my...um....Spike isn't caught up in it....great job, and I really can't wait for ch. 3!!!
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| Opal | 09/24/2005 03:38 am |
| Opal 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm
It's not a stake....lol...
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