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| Mastery by ComedyofErrors |
| Chapter: Chapter 1 |
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| Athenewolfe | 02/17/2006 10:26 pm |
| Powerful first chapter - I can't wait to see what kind of vampire Buffy will make - keeping her soul but being subject to Angelus will be harsh on her I am sure. Great start - I can't wait to read the rest! |
| gaillee | 09/29/2005 06:54 pm |
| Can't wait to see how you wrap this on up...It's been really great. Like the new characters as well as Buffy, Spike, et al. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 09/29/2005 06:53 pm |
| Nail gun ... inventive. Interesting idea. Nice dusting of Angelus. {Smiles} Great chapter. Look forward to the next. |
| Lou | 09/29/2005 06:53 pm |
| The nail gun was an interesting variation. Good strong Buffy too. Love this story. |
| Confused Muse | 09/29/2005 06:53 pm |
| Superb, a direct hit to the tongue to shut Angelus up - thank the lord!
Poor Spike - he always seems to be getting tortured, but hey, he's tough. |
| vladt | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| great story. love the update. thanks. looking forward to to the finale chapter (not!) |
| Esther | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| Great chapter, and I'm so sad to see Chris get dusted...liked him. And can I say....WOOHOO on that Angelus death scene....hot damn, if anyone deserved to get nailed through the neck w/that nail gun, it's him. Poor Spikey, wanted to cry when I read that about him, but Buffy got the jackass in the end. Loved it, and I'm glad that Xander didn't give her a hard time...can't wait for the final chapter...gonna miss this story. |
| Dar | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| WOW! just WOW |
| erika | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| I was following this story on vampires-kiss.net but I was so excited when I found a more recent update on this site. I really like this story. It's very unique to me and very well written. |
| Slaymesoftly | 09/29/2005 06:51 pm |
| Dusty Angelus! yay! Was very worried when he grabbed Spike - but leave it to Buffy to give him his just desserts. Too bad she couldn't have tortured him for a couple of days, but, hey... |
| Oracleholly | 09/29/2005 06:51 pm |
| *18*
Angel dust! YES!! I'm quoting the A-Team when I say "I love it when a plan comes together!" (Molotov coctails - yeah, boy.)
I'm going to miss Chris. Nice reunion scene b/t Xander and Buffy. |
| MarzBar | 09/29/2005 06:51 pm |
| YAY!! Angelus is dust, and Buffy did it!! Waiting for the last chapter. |
| Oracleholly | 09/29/2005 06:50 pm |
| *up to 17*
I LOVE ALEXA!!!! I really like how you are incorporating the minions with the Scoobs. |
| Rhonda | 09/29/2005 06:50 pm |
| Great update. of course Giles would be in the way and I am glad Joyce is putting a stop to him. Loved the update. It is grea to see htem all working together. |
| Opal | 09/29/2005 06:50 pm |
| Great update Linda...
Like everyone else has said...similarities are bound to happen...I for one didn't even notice! |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 09/29/2005 06:49 pm |
| I think it was a great chapter. I like this story. You've had me on the edge of my seat many times throughout the course of it.
I think that similarities are bound to happen, especially with the friendships that are forged between some of the writers. Heck we do all get similar or seemingly same ideas at times, but that doesn't mean we are copying each other. You have your own twist of words, and I say that you shouldn't ever have to worry about other people's story ideas. You have a great creative mind. People should remember that and just realize that similar ideas pop up.
Look forward to the next update. |
| Spikeschilde | 09/29/2005 06:49 pm |
Fantastic update! I’m looking forward to some good old Angel ass kicking
Lol, and I didn’t even notice the similarities to my story until I read you author’s notes at the end ^_~ It’s definitely your own story
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| Esther | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| Great update!!! Like the forced comraderie and the hilarious chat w/Alexa, Willow, and Cordy about minions. Seems Giles hasn't changed, but maybe Joyce will have a hand at helping. Loving the chapter and story. Can't wait for more!!! |
| Rae | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| Fantastic update! Will be waiting for more. |
| Steph | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| Please make angelus' death grumsome, thankyou! |
| Shadowed Sword | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| *bounce* GREAT story, Fantastic Chapter! Cant wait till Angelus gets his poofter arse kicked! |
| Onyx | 09/29/2005 06:47 pm |
| Ok, SERIOUSLY
leaving us hanging like this in not nice! but I love you for it anyway. Great new chapter, I love all your characterizations, and you definitely deserved to be nominated. Can't wait for the next installment. |
| Oracleholly | 09/29/2005 06:47 pm |
| *chapter 16*
congrats on the nods honey! Well deserved.
Great chapter -- love that Cordelia critiquing Spike on the fashion - that's our Cordy.
Nice to see you keep the genuine feelings Cordy had for Xander. LOVED the Oz/Spike predator size up. I LOVE OZ.. but you already know that.
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| daisy | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| you are evil. you can't just leave it there. i hope all of spikes minions are okay. more soon please. awsome story. |
| Judy | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| This story just gets better and better. Great job.
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| Esther | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| Hot damn, I loved that update!!! It's nice to see the Scoobies' POVs and find out their reactions to everything. Oh the ending....poor Spikey....I felt for him with the Dru question. (and I couldn't help but laugh at what Cordy told him....love the look, but that was Classic Queen C) Oh the cliffy....I'm gonna be hoping for more soon. |
| Opal | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| Great update! |
| Francesca | 09/29/2005 06:45 pm |
| Well that was a good... almost happy chapter. I like the accepting Scoobies and the not such a prat Giles. Nice change. I hope Xander will be ok. I really do like Cordy and Xander together in this. |
| PyroChilde | 09/29/2005 06:45 pm |
| Amazing chapter but you're EVIL leaving it that way!! C'mon, hurry and update again ASAP!! Anyways, this chapter was awesome, did I mention that? I loved the reunion with the Scoobies and I especially liked the part with Oz and Spike. I've always believed those two would get along well. Hmmm...wonder how you'll have Xander take the news about Buffy and Spike being together. Hopefully his new more grown-up outlook will help him see past his hatred of the undead. CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 09/29/2005 06:45 pm |
| Okay now that was an evil cliffhanger of cliffhangers. Who screamed outside ... hope that was Spike's minions doing the crossbow firing and not something heading inside to Buffy.
You handled all of the character's emotions and characterizations very well. I enjoyed the chapter. Nice tie ins all around.
Look forward to the next update. |
| Oracleholly | 09/29/2005 06:44 pm |
| *all caught up to chap 15*
Yay! With Buffy standing up for herself with Giles. Since the tape was obviously doctored, Giles should have been suspicious of it, but instead he let that Watcher mentality take over. Bad Giles.
I LOVE ALEXA!!!
sissy |
| sissy | 09/29/2005 06:44 pm |
| I have been reading this fic all night, I absolutely love it so far, well except for most ot the stuff with Angelus. I am not really into the gore I suppose. I love how Spike is so sweet with Buffy. I also love the way she stood up for herself with Giles,and that Joyce still loves her. and that she has her soul, you have a great fic here. i cant wait for more!
sissy |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 09/29/2005 06:43 pm |
| Excellent writing, Comedy. Loved this chapter update and the others. Good to see Buffy sticking up to Giles. I'm glad that she told Giles her side of the story too. I wish I could be a fly on the wall when Joyce gets Giles into the car. She's going to rip him a new one.
Look forward to the next update. |
| Onyx | 09/29/2005 06:43 pm |
| I just read the bulk of this story a few days ago, and I must say the new chapter is spectacular! I love this story with a PASSION! Everything about it is so enchanting, including the few original characters. |
| Opal | 09/29/2005 06:42 pm |
| Awesome update. I like how Buffy gave it to Giles good! Looking forward to the next update. |
| slinkypsychokit | 09/29/2005 06:41 pm |
| Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens once the Scoobies see the new Buffy! Especially after her take-no-BS-attitude towards Giles! And, Go JOYCE!! Yay for the maternal intuition! |
| Rhonda | 09/29/2005 06:41 pm |
| I am glad that finally Giles got a taste of the new Buffy and can see where her loyalty lie. And I am glad that Joyce seems to be in her corner. And how great was it to see the rest of the new Spike/Buffy family taking part even from a distance. Love the update. |
| vladt | 09/29/2005 06:40 pm |
| great update. love the story. thanks. but do not warn of the soon to come ending, just do it. then listen to we readers whine, cry and plead for more. |
| Isabella | 09/29/2005 06:40 pm |
| I have eagerly waited for every chapter of this fiction. I love the story. But what do you mean, just a few more chapters? Do you think there will be a sequel? Hey I see spinoff here. However, you are the writer, I'm just the eager reader. thank you for the great fiction.
Isabella |
| PyroChilde | 09/29/2005 06:39 pm |
That was EVIL leaving it like that!!! > But still an awesome chapter. It figures Giles would assume the worst. I mean he admits that Angelus had to have forced her into killing that child and yet he's still prepared to stake her just because he thinks she should have left him to die at another's hands so that her's stayed clean. He knows how cruel Angelus is and that he would have made sure that little boy died slowly and painfully. He really needs a wake up call here!! I can't wait for the next fic, I LOVE IT!! |
| Kat | 09/29/2005 06:39 pm |
| Amazing chapter but I do seriously hope that Giles gets a wake up call because to be perfectly honest his thinking is sooooooo unfair. And I actually usually like Giles. HMMM |
| Esther | 09/29/2005 06:38 pm |
| Loved it!! Nice to see the other characters highlight some sections...makes them become a real part of the story...and I just adore Alexa...so sweet of her to help Buffy 'entertain' Spike...hot damn!
Oh, the Spuffy was really cute, and I love how domesticated they are already...
Nice to know some stuff about Angelus' whereabouts and what he's doing...gets them prepared for the foreheaded git...hehe...
Oh man, was wondering about that tape, and now I know....can't believe Giles would actually think that Buffy would willingly kill a child while souled...he really doesn't know her, does he?
Cliffy...oh what a cliffy....can't wait for the next one!! |
| Karyn900 | 09/29/2005 06:38 pm |
I'd say it sucks to be Buffy right about now. I knew Giles would never see that she was trying to save the boy from a worse fate. Great update though, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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| vladt | 09/29/2005 06:38 pm |
| thanks for the great update. will be a long week. |
| Rhonda | 09/29/2005 06:37 pm |
| I just hope that Giles will listen to what Buffy has to say about the tape. And GLAD that Buffy and Spike are showing a bonded force. Great update. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 09/29/2005 06:37 pm |
| I was afraid that Giles wouldn't understand. Of course Angelus didn't show the whole rest of it where he killed all the rest, and Buffy was saving the child from a longer and more painful death. {Sighs}
Sucks that you are going away and we won't get an update until your back. I so want to see Angelus get his just deserves. I hope that Buffy can convince Giles of what really happened. |
| Burnz | 09/29/2005 06:37 pm |
No way I could hate you. So they come together. Nice bit of Spuffiness.  |
| Opal | 09/29/2005 06:36 pm |
| YUM! |
| Verona | 09/29/2005 06:36 pm |
| Very very pleased with this story. Very entertaining and not too long. Nice to show the tender side of Spike. I also like how you had Joyce get vengeful. Altogether well written. |
| megs | 09/28/2005 08:38 pm |
| More? Please? please? plllllease? |
| It's coming. Really. The beta has it. |