I like how this chapter was written, from Spike’s point of view on the whole Buffy-turning-him-down and Dru-offering-him-an-alternative. The hesitancy, the indecision, it was something that wasn’t explored as fully as it could have been in the show and I think you’ve done it beautifully.
The big surprise, Spike’s tears and then walking out! OMG, I can’t believe he did that! *Runs off to next chapter…*
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