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| Becoming Spike by Peyton |
| Chapter: 1 |
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| Robyn | 04/24/2006 11:11 pm |
| Great first chapter. I like that you have Spike's and Buffy's thoughts, the dual perspectives are nice. |
| spike_spetslayer | 10/18/2005 03:43 am |
| Wonderful! |
| Thank you!!! |
| jane | 10/17/2005 07:46 pm |
| Loved it so glad Spike realized he was hallucinating. Gotta have that Spuffy luvin. |
| I promise there will be more - butthe *is* angst to come. You were warned. ;^> |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 10/17/2005 06:15 pm |
| Egads ... MORE SOON PLEASE. {clawing around for more chapters}
{Smiles} I loved this update, and I can't wait to see just what the tugging was at his chest. Did Spike get some residual soul magic, hopefully without the curse part? Is it because Dru has skewered Spike to Acathla? Can't wait to find out what is up. |
| Slaymesoftly | 10/17/2005 06:14 pm |
| You're doing great! I've read several takes on this particular episode and yours in an original one (as far as I know, anyway). Can't wait to see where you go with it. |
| Aisling | 10/17/2005 06:13 pm |
oooh! interesting  more soon? cya xx |
| 3988Akasha | 10/17/2005 06:12 pm |
| Bad, evil cliff! Come back...write more! Good author! Anyway, Love the story. I like the POV's and I'm normally not into those types of stories! |
| joyful_dayz | 10/17/2005 06:12 pm |
| Great beginning! I especially like, "All oozing sex appeal, jutting hips and wolfy smirk like he’s God’s gift, or something" - Good Buffy personization.
I can't wait for more. |
