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Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)




CelesteAvonne 05/18/06 - 10:18PM 2: 5.02: Liaise Signed
I'm really liking this story. It flows just an episode of Angel, with the same wit, humor and character interaction that makes the story so readable. I laughed out loud several times, but especially at Gunn's description of hockey! I'll keep reading, for certan.

Author's Response: Thanks soooo much for the encouragement! trust me when I say I need it. I try to strusture things like an episode. I'm trying to have a lot of mini-arcs as well as an overall arc for the season. The characters were my favorites, so I'm happy their interactions are believeable and true to form. Thaks again.

Quortoth 01/26/06 - 02:24PM 2: 5.02: Liaise Signed
You've made me suddenly interested in what Lorne is going to say :-P. I very much enjoyed that story and will read the next one now. Very good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The feedback is really encouraging, especially because I got so little at first.

Violet SS 12/06/05 - 08:47PM 2: 5.02: Liaise Signed
You've done a great job with Eve. I absolutely hated her on the show. I literally dreaded any scenes that she was in. But somehow you've managed to stay true to her character and still make her not only tolerable, but interesting. You've even gotten me interested in the hockey thing. Emma's comment about the money was so innocent and funny.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I know exactly what you mean about hating Eve. Although I desperately, desperately want to take credit for an improved yet true to character Eve, I think the problem with Eve on the show wasn’t that she was well written, but that Sarah Thompson (the actress playing her) wasn’t very good in the role. All I’ve done is stayed true to the writing. Luckily your imagination has excluded the weaker aspects of Miss Thompson’s performances. I’m so happy you’re liking the hockey bit a little more. I have a confession to make. I know NOTHING about hockey. I’ve looked stuff up on the internet and played EA Sports NHL 2003 to try to get some realism in there. (For example, the names of scouts, players, etc.) But I thought the hockey bits could prove interesting. And thanks for the comment on Emma’s innocence with regard to money. If there’s a theme to Connor’s subplot, it was an exchange between Connor and his mom in the first chapter about money changing their lives. I really believe that people often don’t respect money enough. I don’t think they’re wary enough of its ability to consume them or even just change them. Thanks again for the review.

axel 07/12/05 - 12:13AM 2: 5.02: Liaise Signed
another good chapter, but, is this a new story, or the old season 5, from a diffrant viewpoint. (don,t get me wrong, it better than the other) it has all the old people, but the thing with connor is new, so I didn't know. I just hope fred gets a better ending (Killing her is one thing, but killing her soul, that was just wrong.) still keep it up.

Author's Response: It's a new version of season 5. Events will be very different. However, I am keeping most of the characters. I didn't want to re-introduce Eve, because readers already know who she is. I hate spending lots of time going over things the audience already knows.

Buffymanic 07/10/05 - 06:09AM 2: 5.02: Liaise Signed
Fantastic I love how you wrote Eve thats exactly how she would act! Ican't wait for the next episode

Author's Response: I'm working on the next episode now. Glad you like my Eve. She was the character I was most worried about writing.

terry 07/08/05 - 12:26PM 2: 5.02: Liaise Signed
Another cool chapter. Dude, you need to keep this going. I love it and I can't wait for more. It's funny as hell, especially the negotiation. And Gunn- what's up with him? I'm really interested to see where htis goes.

Author's Response: Glad yo ulove it, since it seems to be getting few reads and even less reviews. As for Gunn . . . well, I told you I'm not giving away any spoilers.






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