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megsann 07/28/06 - 05:10PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
I think this story is great. It is the best C/D story yet manages to involve A/B. It is so great it inspired me to write my own story. Thanks

BuffyFanatic 05/26/05 - 01:02PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
I've only had a chance to read the prolouge, but I have bookmarked this story so that I can come back to it when I have more spare time. I really like the start to it and I like the idea of the whole Dawn and Connor thing.

Author's Response: Thank you. I look forward to hearing what you think. I hope you enjoy it.

Tslayer 05/25/05 - 07:31PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
You are an inspiration. I've been meaning to do a Connor/Dawn fanfic, but I just haven't found the time. But I am working on one. The first chapter is finished. and the fic is called Tales Unknown. But I LOVE YOUR FAN FIC! WRITE MORE! MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Keep writing, and quickly. Your grrrrrrrreeeeattt

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I look forward to reading your Connor/Dawn fic. I've greatly enjoyed (for the most part) writing this one. I hope you enjoy the ending.

angelsbabigurl08 05/12/05 - 06:06PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
Hurry and update or I will kill you.Muahahaha!!!

Author's Response: And your wish is my command....Chapter 20 has arrived, and in only a two day wait for you:)

Hebu 05/01/05 - 06:40PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
I was absolutely amazed when I read your story. It's not even finished yet and it completely blew me away! Not only are you a fabulous writer, you captured the characters' personalities SO WELL. I don't think I have ever read a story so beautifully written and thought out. I'm VERY picky when it comes to all things BtVS, so this really means a lot coming from me. I hope to read more of Secrets Exposed soon. :)

Hebu 05/01/05 - 05:21PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
I was absolutely amazed when I read your story. It's not even finished yet and it completely blew me away! Not only are you a fabulous writer, you captured the characters' personalities SO WELL. I don't think I have ever read a story so beautifully written and thought out. I'm VERY picky when it comes to all things BtVS, so this really means a lot coming from me. I hope to read more of Secrets Exposed soon. :)

Author's Response: Well, by the date of your review, looks like you didn't have the horrible wait everyone else had to endure. Thank you so much for all of your kind comments, I hope that you feel the same way when the story is complete.

angelsbabigurl08 02/21/05 - 09:09PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
Oh my goodness.Continue this story or i'm gonna die.You don't want me to die do you?

Author's Response: Of course I don't want you to die, here it is. A morsal to keep you alive until the final chapter. It's almost over!

angelsbabigurl08 01/22/05 - 12:04PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
arrrrrrrrr.please continue your story it's bugging me majorly.lol.

Author's Response: Really, really sorry about the delay. Hope this chapter fuels the fires for a bit!

lilseli69 12/16/04 - 08:22PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
I couldn't stop reading this...it's excellent! You give these characters great depth and you obviously have talent. I have but one question though! Are you basing this story on Connor's memories that were the truth or the fabricated ones? I'm just wondering why Willow wouldn't remember meeting Connor...Unless I am missing something? Let me know...but like I said, great story! Please keep updating!

Author's Response: I promise an update is on the near horizon. As for the memories, this story takes place after 'Origin"' so Connor has both sets of memories. But as far as Willow is concerned, she wouldn't remember, as no one remembered Connor after Angel made the deal with the Senior Partners; and when Connor's memory was returned, only the people that were in the room when the Orlon Window was broken regained the real memories. Those people were Connor, Wes, Illyria, Angel and Vail. Angel and Vail already had this info of course, and Wes, Illyria and Connor became the only others to know what really happened. Therefore Willow would have no recollection of having met Connor, as their meeting was erased from her memory as it was from Faith's and everyone else’s. I'm glad you are enjoying the story, and once I finally get the next chapter up, I hope you decide to review again and let me know if you still like where it is going. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Revello1620 11/28/04 - 01:10PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
This was amazing, I loved it to tiny little bits. I print the stories out so I can read then sitting down in something other than a computer chair and this one is one of my absolute favs!!!

Author's Response: That is so very sweet. I love making printer paper status. That is a status symbol, I'm not being facetious, as it definitely is with me. Very few writers warrant such treatment from me.

inlovewithangel 09/30/04 - 11:02PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the story!!! YAY!! By the way, have you checked out my new chapter of Just The Truth? I love your comments. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! And I am so glad you pointed out that you had put up a new chapter, cause I missed it and I have been waiting anxiously (as I believe you already knew based on my plea-for-more e-mail I sent a while back) I am off to read it now.

Chelle 08/20/04 - 09:12AM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
Yay! A new chapter. I have been checking for them everyday, as well you know. I am really loving this story. The fight scene was very well written, and quite violent. But hey, Buffy and Angel lead violent lives, so it fit perfectly. Your sarcastic slayer speak was very good, as well as the sarcastic college aged teenager speak. Even Angel cracked a few decent Angel-esqe sarcastic one liners. Very much like he would. I loved the setup of the situation for Buffy and Angel to find out about Dawn and Conner, coinciding with Buffy and Dawn finding out that Angel has a kid. I had never been a fan of Connor in the series, until the final season of Angel, and this story builds on that and makes me like him even more. Which I like alot. And of course, Im a fan of your poetic style, word choices and vivid descriptions. It helps me feel like I could be watching it as clear as I have watched all of the eps of both seasons. I cant wait for the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fight scene, you know how nervous I was about that. Your comments regarding the dialogue were also greatly appreciated. (I replied more specifically by e-mail)

filmtheory 07/12/04 - 12:44AM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
I think this is a wonderfully deceptive prologue. It sets the reader up to think he or she is reading a story of Quar’toth Connor, the Destroyer. Then, in the ensuing chapters, they discover that Brady Bunch Connor has taken up demon fighting as an extra-curricular. Great start.

Author's Response: If you're not reading "Legalese " I recommend it highly.

Violet SS 07/11/04 - 12:50PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
At long last I have the time to read this story and your first few paragraphs are a joy to behold. I love your poetic style. I'm not sure if you've changed the prologue since the last review, but I found it beautiful and intriguing and was not distracted by any errant punctuation / spelling.

Author's Response: Thank you. You know how much your opinion means to me since I am so envious of your work. So, I very much appreciate your review, and perhaps it will get me to let go of the next few chapters that I have finished, but have yet to post. Just a little review anxiety.

Author's Response: More like expectation anxiety, just wanted to clear that up.

Kellcool 07/06/04 - 02:30PM 1: Prologue: The Destroyer Signed
Cool story so far, keep it up. But just make sure that you are putting in the right spelling and punctuation in some parts.

Author's Response: Thanks for your response. I assume the mention to the spelling, word choice, and punctuation had to do mostly with this prologue. It was the last passage I wrote and I wanted to get it out there quickly so I could start posting the other chapters. The grammar has always been important to me which is why I spend too much time editing and re-editing my story. Please e-mail me if you find additional mistakes, and let me know what they are. They are few and far between and definitely should not be a draw away from the story itself.






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