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Reviews for Secrets Exposed




Kevin 09/10/04 - 11:20AM 5: To Date, Stake, and Hunt Signed
You really captured the anxiety of a first date. I love Connor’s Faith-esque tendency to use slaying as “stress” relief.

Author's Response: Strangely enough I never saw the obvious similarity to Faith in his behavior. But you are right, there it is. Thanks for the insightful review.

Violet SS 07/14/04 - 11:29PM 5: To Date, Stake, and Hunt Signed
This was great. Dawn's demure response to Connor's awe at her looks was perfect. The excuses she made were hilarious. And you had me hoping that Connor would just spit out what he was thinking. I also liked the little bit of Connor reflection at the end.

Author's Response: I hoped her responses were funny. And I was a bit unsure of leaving in the reflection, so I'ts nice to know that you liked it.

filmtheory 07/06/04 - 07:37PM 5: To Date, Stake, and Hunt Signed
I’m not so much amazed that you wrote two chapters in one night than I am that you wrote two excellent chapters in one night. The chapter on Buffy at first left me somewhat dissatisfied as it was exposition (brilliant exposition, but only exposition) and didn’t move the plot forward. However, the subsequest chapter satisfied my craving for plot movement and aloowed me to go back and enjoy and recognize Buffy’s chapter (4) for the superb character study that it was.

Author's Response: You know, I was really worried about the Buffy chapter, because of the length of the exposition as you mentioned. I fear that in subsequent chapters I may fall into that trap again as the characters find out things that we as the audience already know…but I'm working on avoiding it as much as possible. Thanks again for reviewing.






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