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Reviews for Close Your Eyes




terry 09/02/05 - 02:09AM 1: Liam Signed
F***ing beutiful. I love the twist you give to his personal life. I also *love* the title. "Close Your Eyes" is one of the most beautiful lines on the show; Buffy repeating what Darla told Angel jsut before he was turned right before Buffy sends him to hell. I really, really, hope you keep going with this. It's a way interesting subject and you're really doing a lot with it.

Author's Response: Wow...thank you! I was beginning to lose my muse and inspiration for this story, but the last two reviews for it have spurred me on, to keeping up with it. I have many unfinished fan fics that I am working on right now, so it might be a week or so before I can post. Again, thanks for the review, they are encouraging! -Marissa

Monkey Pants 08/05/05 - 12:47PM 1: Liam Signed
I started reading this story and felt a little disappointed, as there's only two installments! Angel's human life is an interesting subject to write about, and I hope that you do decide to update soon :)

Author's Response: Wow. First off, I would like to thank you. I have not had a review for this story in so long that I was considering taking it off, and not even trying to finish it. But, you have given me the inspiration to pick this story up again. I had a burst of creativity a couple of weeks ago, and started writing new stuff like crazy. Now I think it is time to focus on the old stuff, and keep it going. This, Black Goddess Trilogy, and Same Old Song were my first fan fics, so I think I'll finish those up. If you are interested in my efforts to document the multiple characters of BtVS and AtS, then also check out Black Goddess Trilogy. It isn't finished yet either, but it's a documentation of Spike from the time he is made a vampire until an unknown time in the future. I considered adding a chapter about his human life. Let me know what you think and maybe I will. Thanks again for the review, sorry I just wrote you a novel of a response! -Marissa

Revello1620 12/05/04 - 07:29AM 1: Liam Signed
This was really great, I am a big fan of the happiness one moment and pain the next. I can't wait to for you to update

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I to am a fan of happiness followed by lose, so I understand that! As I said in another response, I will be updating soon. I have been writing stuff, I just have not had the time to update...sorry! Thanks again for the review, and I hope you enjoy the pain to come! -Marissa

Lainey_x_Rose 07/25/04 - 05:00PM 1: Liam Signed
Shay ! Your are a magnificent writer as well. Though the chapter was short I see it going many places. I am very much looking forward to the other chapters and being able to enjoy them as much as I did this one. Keep Writing ! * Lainey

Author's Response: Lainey, thank you for your review! I know the chapter is short, I feel really bad about that, but I'm writing more right now! I'm glad you enjoyed it, it always makes me happy when people enjoy my work! I hope to read some new stuff from you soon as well! -Marissa

filmtheory 07/24/04 - 12:45AM 1: Liam Signed
This was a way, way short chapter which makes it hard to review, but based on your past work, the strength of your premise, and the truly brilliant tile I’m giving you 10/10 just to encourage you to keep going. I’m curious as to whether this series will run straight through his life or if it will jump around. Either will be very interesting. One typo: I think the line “It was harder that with Liam.” Was supposed to be “It was harder than with Liam.” (“than” not “that”). Still, a great start. I like that you begin with the birth of his siter and not his birth. Very cool. (Just a note: “Close your eyes” may be my favorite line form BtVS. I had the soundtrack to BtVS before I saw that episode. I knew that Buffy and Angel’s love theme was called “Close Your Eyes.” When I heard the line, it was one of those chill-inducing moments that made me so happy yet so sad).

Author's Response: Filmtheory, hi. Thanks for the good review! I had already fixed that typo, but thanks anyway! Also, I'm glad someone made the connection between Buffy and Angel, with that line, and not just Darla and Angel. When Darla makes Angel a vampire, she tells him to 'close his eyes', so I wanted to title this fan fiction that, because of the fact that, that, line is said by the two most important and influential women in Angel's life. The series will *hopefully* run straight through his life. I'm sorry it was so short, and you've read my other fanfiction? I don't recall such a kind review for any of those! I'm desperate for a review for "Same Old Song", so if you have already read it, I would love a review, but if you haven't, you don't have to waste your time! Well thanks again for the review, they make me want to write more! -Marissa

spikelover6661 07/23/04 - 04:31PM 1: Liam Signed
I like thinking of a young child Angel! I think it promises to be a good fan fiction, if you add more.

Author's Response: Spikelover, thanks so much for your review! I thought it would be interesting to see Angel as Liam. I also wanted to explore the characters in his family, more than they are able to do on the show. I promise to add more soon, and am sorry that this was so short! Thanks again, for a good review, I'm addicted to them!






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