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sugarmouse 04/22/06 - 11:00AM 18: Chapter Eighteen Signed
This story's really great! Im think that the fact you've brought Hank back into it is awesome! I've always wondered what would happen if he did come back.....and you've written it very well! Im loving the story with Giles, Hank and Buffy....I wonder how it will turn out?.............Also, Xander didn't leave Anya!YAY! Please keep wirting! Update soon!

CelesteAvonne 04/06/06 - 10:21PM 18: Chapter Eighteen Signed
Must... have... more! I'm glad to have stumbled across this story. It's been the highlight of my night. I think you're very true to the voice of the characters.

MissEdith 02/10/06 - 04:15PM 18: Chapter Eighteen Signed
Wow, I'd totally given up on this fic. So glad you've updated it. Dawn's raving was great. And Willow's lines at the end reminded me of Lord of the Rings. Remember Frodo, the Ring wants to be found...

SakuraSyaoran4eva 02/09/06 - 08:28PM 17: Chapter Seventeen Signed
I really do like this story. Yet, there are a few instances where I think you'd be better off w/ a beta. You're very good w/ characterization, this is very creative and well thought out - but there are quite a bit of spelling/grammer mistakes. I catch myself continually wishing this could be a Dawn/Spike pairing as they're so close - I doubt you'll so that just as much as I doubt you'll do the Spuffy thing. Angel/Buffy? Please? There's totally nothing better then some Angel-Buffy romance. And it would work out well b/c then Hank would get to know ANgel, would find out about that period in Buffy's life and hello! It's Angel! The whole Hank conversation thing is just a bonus. Lol. Hopin Angel drops in soon, SS4EVA PS. Liked what you did, w/ the sign thing. I'm hopin B will forgive the Gman soon - cuz he's way more her father then Hank in every way possible (though u hav managed to redeem him)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I actually do have a beta, but it's difficult to catch every spelling a grammar error. If you could tell me where the ones you found are then I can fix them. I'd really appreciate it. I should probably point out that I'm Canadian, so I spell colour with a u, as well as honour, and programme with the extra "me".

I'm glad you're enjoying the Dawn/Spike elements of the story. I was really upset when that friendship was just dropped from the show. I'm actually not planning any real 'ships for this story.

Thanks for the review!


Alex Wert 01/18/06 - 07:43PM 1: Chapter One Signed
Wow. You just pile angst on top of angst, don't you? Keep it up.

Author's Response: *g* Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

nutchick 12/31/05 - 10:07PM 1: Chapter One Signed
i dont know if you even are still with the writing of this story but if so i really like it. i hope you continue maybe you'll pick it up again. great job so far.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review! I am still writing this story. I have another chapter that I will post soon, and I'm working on the next one. I want to get the story close to finished before I start posting again so that I'm not making people wait as long between postings. I'm glad you like it!

slayerfest 08/20/05 - 01:46AM 12: Chapter Twelve Signed
Hahahaha. While it's apparent that you strongly dislike certain military prats whose name starts with R and ends in iley, I like how you show it. You completely put a spin on the episode As You Were, and I like the way it was done with the whole fighting with wifey and the Spike being angry. I'm really enjoying this story, I thought you should know. I wasn't going to comment until as far as you've written, but I thought I ought to comment about Riley. Good work!

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks. Yeah, I really dislike Riley, but it's been pointed out to me that I should attempt not to alienate everyone out there who likes him, so I tried to at least be fair to the guy.

Thanks so much for commenting! I really appreciate feedback. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story!


spuffylover23 07/31/05 - 01:58AM 17: Chapter Seventeen Signed
I really hope it will have more spuffiness in the future but so far I really like it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm not going to lie to you, I don't see it heading in the direction of Spuffy, simply becuase I want to focus on Buffy's relationships with her father figures.

MissEdith 05/04/05 - 09:17PM 17: Chapter Seventeen Signed
Very nice. The janitor's closet was a nice touch! If only Hell's Bells had really turned out that way... :(

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the end of Hells Bells just never seemed right to me. Glad you liked the chapter.

spikeNdru 04/08/05 - 09:28PM 15: Chapter Fifteen Signed
Never mind--I just figured out how to add it!

spikeNdru 04/08/05 - 09:26PM 15: Chapter Fifteen Signed
Great story! I'm thoroughly enjoying this. I wanted to add it to "My Favorites" in my profile thingy, but I don't know how. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hee! Glad you like! I will be writing some more soon, and you will definitely see it first! *g*

filmtheory 03/30/05 - 06:38PM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
Great dinner scene. It must've been horrible, and to some extent humiliating, to have a family dinner punctuate the darkest and most humiliating period of her life. Then as an exclamation point, she had that twist at the end. Poor Hank will have a hard time understanding Buffy's relationship with Spike once he comes out of Denial-land and realizes his hunch was right. Great Stuff!

Author's Response: Heh, I loved writig the dinner scene, which I definitely had to tone down a wee bit, since my Riley-loathing came through. I'm glad you thought it worked well!

filmtheory 03/30/05 - 05:23PM 9: Chapter Nine Signed
Very funny chapter. you didn't miss a single opportunity to turn a joke. Hank's thoughts were great. "She was tiny and blond. She should be screaming." Anya and Hank are great foils to each other. Anya understands the supernatural, but not regular human interaction. Hank is the opposite. hanks's concern for Buffy, "How long had she been doing this *alone*" (emphasis added) cuts right to his own guilt and his own sins. The ending, with his promising to try, was perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks again! I definitely wanted to redeem Hank a little in this chapter, but I couldn't do it too much, since he stil has a ways to go.

filmtheory 03/30/05 - 05:04PM 8: Chapter Eight Signed
This was, as usual, a great chapter. You've definitely selected a very compelling subject matter. As I've said a billion times, but will say again, you have the characters down pat. Xander is perfect, especially with his hysterical comments. Poor Hank. he gets tossed into this world pretty quickly, but does okay. Hank's thoughts about drugs (it has programs! And steps!) was awesome. Great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hee, the drugs and programmes was a lot of fun to write! Hysterical parents always thinkg 'drugs' first :)

rockangelz25 03/21/05 - 04:42PM 15: Chapter Fifteen Signed
Yea! A bitch session between Giles and Hank! *Ahem.* Sorry. I just had to get out my joy over that one. The chapter was great, and it was good to see Giles and Hank finally go at it. I loved Buffy's trying to cover up for Hank, combined with the fact that they're still underestimating Dawn (which, I personally think isn't good, but is pretty characteristic). The chapter is great overall, and leaving me eagerly wanting more as usual. Great job once again! Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Sorry it's taken me so long to update, but there will be a new chapter soon.

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