Reviewer: 20150509yuanyuan
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/2015 - 10:45 pm
Title: One shot
Reviewer: Buffy Convert
Anonymous
Date: 04/01/2014 - 04:52 pm
Title: One shot
it was easy to 'hear' who was saying what; Spike has a British accent.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/15/2013 - 08:23 pm
Title: One shot
Pretty hot.
Reviewer: BuffyConvert
Anonymous
Date: 05/23/2009 - 04:30 pm
Title: One shot
Wasn't sure I would like it at first, but I did. Yes, I could tell who was talking because whenhas Spike NOT had time to kiss & cuddle? (after all, I'm sure his grand-sire taught him to always play with his food. : )
I like the idea of someone overhearing them. I think it would be interesting if it was someone from a less sophisticated part of the country, who was just visiting Sunnydale, maybe see Spike as an incabus.
I've only been aware of SpuffyRealm for a few months. I got kicked out of the county library because of my "nasty" reading, but I have found a non-public computer now. I have a few ideas, maybe I'll try to write something soon.
Reviewer: spuffy
Anonymous
Date: 12/27/2007 - 04:24 am
Title: One shot
hoo nice fic
it was very easy to know who said each line and u made my brain work a little to see them and it was so good!
Author's Response: a little late but I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!! Thank you for the review!
Sarah
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Reviewer: Gillypod Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 06:23 am
Title: One shot
Well, it's nice to see you back in the fold, babes. There are a lot of us who have really missed your writing. I 'got it', as you so delicately put it, and I have to say that I enjoyed it too. My mind was quite happy to build the scene in my head, I could even see the facial expressions. Nice work and well done. I hope you are up to writing more soon..You have been missed
Author's Response: Again, a little late to be responding but thank you so much hun!
Haven't spoken in ages and unless I really missed something haven't seen an update for ages!! Hope you're doing ok hun!
Glad you enjoyed this!
Sarah
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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/14/2007 - 04:07 pm
Title: One shot
I had no problem following it, because of being dialog only. Enjoyed :)
Author's Response: Thanx hun
Glad you enjoyed it
Sarah
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Reviewer: Raspy_Luv
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 10:56 pm
Title: One shot
It was a tad confusing when they were just grunting. Couldn't tell who was who right at first when they picked back up with talking. Maybe color coding the text would help. I dunno, but I liked it nonetheless. : )
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it regardless!!! Am frankly too lazy to bother with dividing the text now hehe but glad you got there and liked it eventually hehe
Sarah
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Reviewer: gdo
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 10:17 pm
Title: One shot
I read the summary so fast I thought an elf was going to be involved. But hee, funny. Yeah, I was getting what was going on with the dialoug; you could have made it longer by having him play with her tits for a sentence, but that's just a suggestion so you get 2000 words. beyond that, I liked: “Meh.......forget about it for now. " and “Meh.......forget about it for now. " hee. But I liked it a lot!
Author's Response: LOL!!!!! I actually toyed with the idea of starting with the elf but decided just to stick to strictly to the dialogue. Lol glad you liked that line - I just love the sound of 'meh' hehe.
Glad you enjoyed it!!
Sarah
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Reviewer: zombiegirl
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 09:47 pm
Title: One shot
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I so got it. The whole thing Kicks ass.
Author's Response: Lol!!! Glad you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wwell it had been kicking my ass to be published so I'm glad it kicked ass in general - ok i'm making the sense that's not but thanks for reviewing!!
Sarah
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Reviewer: janice
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 06:41 pm
Title: One shot
*whew* that was hot ;) love your fics! when i saw that sarah aless posted a new fic i was like.."ahhh!" haha it was good.
(and somehow put me into the christmas spirit? huh)
Author's Response: Lol!!! Glad it put you in the Christmas Spirit - y'know one of the things that always drew me to Spuffy was the snark between them and to be honest snark kinda makes me think of Christmas - y'know the whole family together ..........royally pissing one another off hehe. Glad you liked it and it managed to hit the realms of 'hot' for you - just what I was hoping for|!
Sarah
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Reviewer: DevilishGurl0222 Signed
Date: 12/13/2007 - 12:28 pm
Title: One shot
i thought it was cute! it sounds like both of them! lol i'm so loving this fic you should do a sequel as to what happens at the christmas party. Oh and it may not have been graphic but it was verbal enough
Author's Response: glad it sounded like them to you.............sequel huh? Hmmmm you may have just given me even more writing I desperatly want to do!!
Glad you liked
Sarah
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Reviewer: Heidi
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 11:08 am
Title: One shot
He he he.Thought it was good. It wasn't hard to follow at all. Funny. Liked it a lot. Good to see you're writing again : )
Author's Response: Hi!!! Is this the Heidi I think it is? Whether it is or not - thanks soo much for your review. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Hope to be writing a lot more soon!
Sarah
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Reviewer: Sotia Signed
Date: 12/13/2007 - 08:55 am
Title: One shot
Totally got it, TOTALLY liked it! So glad you're back, you really have been away TOO bloody long!
Happy Holidays!!!
XXX
Author's Response: *hangs head* SORRY!!!! I will try to make up for being away for so long by writing as much as possible over the next couple of weeks I promise!!
Happy Holidays to you too hun
Sarah
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Reviewer: RB
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 08:47 am
Title: One shot
Great story. I loved it. The idea is very interesting and you made it work well. Glad to see you back at the SpuffyRealm. Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Hey there - thanks for the review soo glad you enjoyed it. It feels good to be back actually in fact I'd never go anywhere else if real life would just leave me alone for five minutes!!
Sarah
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Reviewer: Bernardette
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 08:40 am
Title: One shot
You did great. I was able to follow the the story with no problem Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response: Gad you could follow it and enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Sarah
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Reviewer: hotlipedjen
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2007 - 08:18 am
Title: One shot
I think you did a fine job outside your normal sphere. It's good to work 'outside the box' every now and again.
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Sounds strange but it wasn't at all premaeditated to go outside the box - the whole ficlet in it's entirety kinda jumped on me one day.............those plot bunnies are odd ducks!
Sarah
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